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Well.. here is how I ''roll''. I will do up to three of your poems. What I mean by do.. is comment on them. ONLY THREE PER PERSON. I will comment harsh.. so if you just want ''oh this poem was the best EVER'' ...go somewhere else.

Oh by the way.. I will close this at 2:30 (my time). It is now about 12:50. So hurry up..

ANY TAKERS?

Could you please do hand in hand Ivory black and in a world of criticise please

nope u can add me to ur fav list thanks again

MY1&only... I did Lost Dreams and Tainted Memories.. I already commented on Tangled Silence before.

Good work both of you.

uh.. I'm not sure if its 2:30 yet.. but can you do any poem that have haven't done.. your name looks really familar. otherwise I would have said Chaotic Mind

Yeah.. I did that one before. I did two others on your featured. Good work.

By the way people.. it is 1:46 here. Time is running out.

too late?
if not

i wish
this is my "i love you"

thanx!

Done. Good work.

NOTE: It is 2:00. hurry hurry little mice.

hi, thanx for the comment, nd thanx for the honesty! i'll work on my poems!

Eee, I hope I haven't ran out of time. If I have then just ignore this, lol.

`My Sister's Keeper
`Little Cup of Death
`Mascara Bleeds

Thanks.

Done. Good Work. I loved Mascara Bleeds.

Okay.. it is 2:26.. I am just gonna close this. Nice job everyone.. have a good day.

Awe. =[ I was hoping for good critism...
Oh well. Better luck next time.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

You weren't s*^&ing me when you said you were gonna be harsh. lol, pretty much all I got from you was 'Your poems suck' and thats it.. no advice to say how to make it better. 'Your flow was s*&^' and yeah. That's it. I agree with Sheena.. I wanted good critism.

I don't like telling people how to improve their poems.. because most people take it the wrong way.

if possible can you comment moving on. just that one will do..thanks

If you were to tell me how i could make it better, i'd thank you. but lol, you just crack me up. Granted you said my first poem was 'good' but the second you said sucked.. but yeah.. I guess some poems don't sit well with other people, i guess mine just gave you indigestion.