Condescending;Heart's Title Contest.

So heres the deal... I dont like to enter contests with
lame titles; So I tried to think of some good ones.
I Hope you like them...

Rules:
1 One Title Per Person
2 HAS to be NEW
3 CANT be lyrics
4 Has to have an abcb rhyme scheme
5 No Swearing
6 No longer than 40 lines.

Rewards:
I will have decided the rewards by the time the contest is over.

Due Date/ Judging Time:
I Think about the 19th of January.
Maybe earlier depending on how well the contest is doing.

TITLES:
Undeniably nothing;(R: ...♀Loving Him♂...)
Hurtful Titles;
flawless complexion; (D.disturbed one)
Almost okay; (D:CharismaticCountryGirl)
Feelingless; (D.Tine .x. ♥)
Missing him/her; (R:George Curious Allmighty)
So disappointed; (E: silhouette, of something unimagi)
Harmful descions; (D:♥SoSickOfTears♥)
No Reasons To Stay; (D.Twisted Heart)
Broken Chains; (D: Wings Of Flames)
Undesired; (R:My Decadent)
Vulgar statments;
Intoxicated Whispers; (D. *Gem*)

[R = reserved]
[D = done]
[E = edit]

I'd like ALMOST OKAY! Thank you...
Great titles!!!
Charisma*

so i was looking and looking and i was all.. i dont no what to pick but then i was like UNDENIABLY NOTHING! haha i didnt even see it there at first :(

so undeniably nothing please

Broken Chains

Upon the coldest floor,
Near the darkest tomb,
Sitting near the sharpest blades,
In my eternal womb,

Sentence over by tomorrow,
Final rest at last,
I hold no regrets of crime,
A shame they are in past,

If I had the chance,
I'd torture once again,
But chains hold me down,
I want to feel no pain,

Suculant innocents,
With rosy cheeks,
Tasteful beautifuls,
What desire seeks,

I don't want your adultry,
I don't need a breast,
I want to taint the innocence,
Not to grope your chest,

Alas the morning after,
I shall seek my sleep,
Hang me, drown me, kill me,
Let all my crimson seep,

Beauty should be free,
But limit should be taught,
I am the teacher,
And all virgins to be saught,

Goodbye my students,
So long to the school,
No need for textbooks,
Cause I have played the fool.

- Emma

Almost Okay

My eyes weigh heavy
My heart's a little torn
Thoughts a bit jumbled
As I sink past forlorn

I'm covered in dust
From my fall to the ground
I feel all alone
As if no one's around

Sleep has escaped me
And I'm wide awake
Left to remember
My biggest mistake

Old pictures haunt me
And the void in my soul
Just to remind me
I'm so full of holes

Time barely moves
Like the hands stand still
To drain my strength
Show my lack of will

But if you were to ask
How I'm doing today
I'd be forced to lie,
"I'm almost okay."

By: Charisma*
(still may edit like you said we could do, though I've done some editing already.)

Please reserve me a place. No reason to stay, sounds good.

I'd like to reserve feelingless.. Thanks a lot!

x

can i please have flawless complexion

i think i have an idea for it =)

Okay;;
So Far So Good... Keep em Coming!

Hey Check Out My New Poem If You'd Like!
- I Cant Watch You Lose Yourself; -

Can i reserve Intoxicated Whispers?

yes of course... its reserved.

No Reason To Stay
By: Twisted Heart

I feel the distance in you eyes
A painted smile upon your face
Among the pain of hurtful lies
Love has failed to find a place.

I tried to hold you with my heart
When in fact you walked away
My soul felt empty, pulled apart
But I so wanted you to stay.

In thoughts I saw you all anew
Like love had lent another dream
With faith, I knew, we'd pull through
Much stronger for the struggle seen.

A foolish lie, my heart now hears
Told to myself, day after day
Now I must face the truth that's clear
There's not a reason for me to stay

Feelingless
by Tine Delien

How can one explain this?
How can one show the feelings
That are no more?
How the feelingless ruptures
Every time feelings should be shown
Every time there should be some emotion coming

I wonder what it was
That made you go this numb
Because you used to be so passionate
With everything that would come
And now you don’t seem to care at all
I’d love for you to show emotion, if only some

You don’t even say anymore
That you love me, or that you care
You just seem to live in a shell
Very solitary, not wanting to be anywhere
I crave to kiss you, make you show feelings
But something really holds me back

It hurts to see you, feeling nothing
Being as feelingless as you are
Because I need you, I love you, I want you to be happy
I wanted for you to go so far
Spreading your greatness all over
But it’s of no use at all.. your feelings all are over…

x

Tine .x. ♥ i just wanted to tell u that, that was not the way i wanted the poems to be written. i wanted it to be dont like the other ones... abcb in sets of four like the others u have tell the 19th to fix it. or else i will have to take you out :(

I would like to reserve "Undesired" please!
Thank you ^^

Okay;;

Undesired
by My Decadent

Weakened pounding... fading to silence
Peeling walls of flesh barely stand -
A futile shelter, an abandoned place,
A darkened ruin in a forlorn land...

Deceiving shape - a morbid tune
Echoes within, louder each night;
The master of feelings, controller of all,
Forever dark and nevermore bright...

Slowly each day it dies a bit more,
Getting weaker, getting tired -
Poisoning instigations provoked by
A dark malicious heart - undesired...

Hope you like it ^^

I finished mine..i hope im allowed to edit it later cuz i dont really like some of it...but heres mine

Flawless Complexion

I know of a girl so perfect,
She makes the whole world stutter,
Even if she was any less pretty,
Shed still make my butterflies flutter,

Shes always so content,
And has nothing to hide,
Always so happy,
Looks at herself with pride,

Then one day I saw,
A different side of her,
A side Ive never seen,
I didnt see it coming its still a blur,

I found out later,
She cries herself to sleep,
Every night before bed,
She needs a chance to weep,

Hiding behind a masquerade,
And her sweet reflection,
She covers up the lies,
With a flawless complexion

i changed one word...probably wont make a diff but it makes the last line sound better...if u didnt catch it...i changed it from with her flawless complexion...to with a flawless complexion

okay; great job everyone.

could i reserve "So disappointed" ?
please and thank you

Can I reserve: Missing Him/Her.
PLEASE.
Thank you, Very much.

Can i reserve Harmful decisions please?
xx

all reserved... now theres only one left. and then we wait tell there all written.

Missing Him[MyBrother].

His way of smiling gave me ease.
His way of loving captivated me.
His way of caring made me forget,
All the reasons I did worry.

His dreams took me in,
And, seemed to set aside..
All the pain that was hidden,
And, all the tears I cried.

At only 11, he was my idol.
At only 11, a smile with out end.
At only 11, and all he's been through..
He was my brother, my best friend.

Things have changed since dad left.
He's faded into another world.
Beaten, bruised, and cut..
by the unearthly sword.

He's depressed and rude.
Constantly angry.
Forgiven but hated,
By only me.

All he's been through.
All I try to understand.
Just seems to put me..
In another world, another land.

I'm missing him.
My brother and friend.
I'm missing him..
Until the end.

Harmful Decisions.

Harmful Decisions
A boy picks up a gun
He turns it on his brother
His dad and finally his mum.

Harmful Decisions
A girl makes someones life living hell
Harmful Decisions
Telling her she'd regret it if she were to tell.

Harmful Decisions
A father shows no love
His daughter cries everyday
He wont even give her a hug.

Harmful Decisions
A man rapes a young girl
This Harmful Decision
Tore apart her world.

Harmful Decisions
A girl cuts herself everyday
crying herself to sleep at night
Wishing the pain would go away.

Many people want to
Make the world a better place
But others want to destroy it
Turn it to decay and waste.

The ones who want to make it better
Have so many wonderful visions
But how can they succeed in their mission
When they have to compete against Harmful Decisions?

just Vulgar statments;
and then thats it... personally i really like that title.
i got so many ideas when i thought abour it.

oh there is also Hurtful Titles (Goth Creep Weirdo ect.);

*****NOW EDITED!!!*****

So disappointed
by Silhouette, of something unimaginable

Lonely she calls him
just to hear him talk
they end their conversation
she steps outside, for a small walk

he calls her back
telling her how much he loves her
she smiles and says i love you too
then as the call ends he says "good-bye my lover"

with the dial tone buzzing in her ear
she runs to his house checking on him
walking the steps up to his room
she calls his name that's when she sees them

pausing she takes a second look
knowing who they are
she turns to see him
with blood on his hands he touches her hair

"I'm sorry, i didn't mean to do it,"
"but how could you? why would you?
they loved you and now they are dead
what happen, who did it who!?"

"it was me and i don't know why
something came over me, it couldn't be avoided
i really don't know what happened
again I'm sorry i didn't meant to leave you so disappointed."

Okay so that was a good poem... but for the second time (but a different person) u have to follow the rules... u have to the day of the judgin to fix it or else i will disqualify you.

sorry i forgot about that rule when i wrote this poem.....i will write a new one for it.....will try to get it done soon...again sorry

I'm sorry about my fault in rhyming :( I'll write a new one, k? :)

ciaooo
x

okay;;
just a reminder as well, it has to be written instanzas of 4.

a
b
c
b

d
e
f
e

and so own.

good job to everyone so far!

Xx Intoxicated Whispers XX

“You’re so hot; you make me want to scream”
“I think you’re being a bit extreme”
“No, I’m serious, you’re so damn pretty”
“I’m not interested, such a pity”

“But I want to feel you, kiss you so much”
“No you don’t, so please don’t touch”
“But you look so hot in that red dress”
“Oh please, could you just give it a rest”

“How about me and you go back to mine?”
“I don’t think so, have you lost your mind?”
“But baby, I’ll show you what a real man’s like”
“I won’t tell you again, just take a hike!”

“But I just can’t control myself around you”
“Well sorry, I guess you’ll have to learn to”
“But don’t you want to have some fun with me?”
“Thank you but no, I have to disagree”

“Look, stop hassling me, trying to touch
I don’t want to be in your drunken clutch
Intoxicated whispers are all that I hear
Maybe next time, but without the beer” ©

*Gem*

(I'm sorry about the rhyem scheme, i didn't notice it until after i'd posted it.. is it okay to keep it in, cos i tried to change it, but it doesn't make sense when i swap lines around =( If not, i guess i'll have to withdraw cos i like this poem and i don't want to scrap it and do it over =(
Let me know ok? Thanks
Gem x

ok I've changed my poem...
I don't really like it this much anymore but it's the only way to change the expresiion that I gave to the scentences into the rhyme scheme you wanted.. :)

Feelingless,
by Tine Delien

How can one explain this?
How can one show the emotion
That is no more?
Should One live with more caution?

Every time feelings should be shown
Or an emotion should be, you show none
I wonder what it was
That made you go this numb

Because you used to be so passionate
With everything that would come
And now you don’t seem to care at all
I’d love for you to show emotion, if only some

You don’t even say anymore
That you love me, or that you care
You just seem to live in a shell
Very solitary, not wanting to be anywhere

I crave to kiss you, make you show feelings
But something really holds me back
It hurts to see you, feeling nothing
Being as feelingless as you are, you show lack

And still I need you, I love you, I want you to be happy
I didn’t want you to fall
I’d love to see you Spreading your greatness al over
But it’s of no use at all..

x hope you still like it.. :)

*Gem* Okay Well since is DOES have a rhyme sceme even though it isnt the way i wanted it u can keep it. But next time make sure its the right way. And your the only exception for this.

Condescending;Heart.

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