i just rewrote a poem tell me what u think

  • emptysole
    19 years ago

    hey i just revised an old poem of mine called dad can people please tell me if its any better???

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  • Tainted Beauty
    19 years ago

    Done:)

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  • TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    19 years ago

    Done.

    Great job!!.

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  • Cindy
    19 years ago

    I read both of your poems Dad. The revised is the best. both are excellent amd heartfelt. Take care Cindy

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  • emptysole
    19 years ago

    hmmm ok

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