{[[ Titled Contest ]]}

Okay.

If anyone knows who has poems reserved please tell them to get them done. My computer at school isn't letting me message them.

I'll have mine in by Friday

Hiding behind a brick wall

And when they shot my daddy
I tried to stand up tall,
But I still appeared so small,
Hiding behind that brick wall.

And when they stabbed my mummy
I tried to catch her fall,
But I couldn’t reach her at all,
Not from behind that brick wall.

I keep kidding myself,
It’s a physical reality.
But really it’s what I need,
Driving this insanity.
Some weed to smoke,
I need my dope,
Some coke to snort.
It’s my only hope.
It’s how I cope.

Blame it on the “wall.”
It’s not my fault at all.

And I’m wrapped up in my bed,
With the rain for a blanket
The drugs twist with my head,
As I settle on the bench.
But I’m safe from harm,
No more alarm,
No time to stall,
Behind this brick wall.

Only the drugs can enthral,
Only they can get me moving,
Along the street, another night
Of hiding behind the brick wall.

It’s not my fault at all.

WOW!!

I'm working on it *Nods*

EXAMS!
oh my... well im not postive that i will be able
to do my title by the 30th... but im gunna try.
so please dont give it away yet.
if i get to over loaded... i will tell you.

thanks
C;;H.

It's okay. I was thinking of having it go for til the 12th of Febuary. Two days before Valentines Day!

could i reserve save me?

im sorry but can i unreserve pregnant and dying inside..plz...i wont be able to get it done.

Hey.

Let's keep going!

You've just saved me! Thanks for postponing the deadline, the poem is on my laptop and it's not working at the moment and won't get fixed til Monday. So thanks!

Your Welcome Gem. I just wanted more people to enter so if you have friends on here tell them to check it out!!

Save Me

Noone can help me,nobody can hear my voice
Nobody can take me away from this life
I took refuge of it,but now no place to hide
Save me from myself,save me from what i have done

First i let it be in me,but later i understood
I can't breathe with it,i got to pray for myself
All the things that i did,i must have an excuse for myself
No return from this way,no way that existed

At that time everybody got me wrong
Noone talked or let my heart to sing its song
Even my mother slapped me,after she cried very long
The drug that i let in had my life ruin

Later that i thought of two solution,let it be the begining
Let it be the end,of what ended up my life
I would end it up and let a long breath
It was the right answer,it was a new start

I was decisive and i went to
The place where i did my mistake
It was a mistake for you to be life
I said,and i was done

What i thought was the real mistake
I can't take it,how could a daughter
How could a daughter make her dad's life ended
I suffocate in pain,yeah i got nothing in my life added

I know he did everything to me,he was the drug
That ruined myself,he screwed me
Even i begged him to stop
But now i know i still have his heart with me

Now got nomore tears to cry,no faith to trust
That my life could change,with fate could write
There is just a thing i wrote,as i cut my wrist
Save me from myself,save me from what i have done

i did a mix of this two subject,hope you like it(drugs and family abuse)

The first time in my entire life, I'm going to have to unreserve 'He Took Me To The Cemetary'. I've pondered over this poem for weeks and I just can't seem to get anything decent to come out. I'm really sorry.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Laura,

The poem is really good! It's great. Thanks for taking part in this contest.

the twisted game you play.

It's a game of hide and seek,
how big of a secret can you keep?
It's a game if you run and hide,
the fear of tears you have not cried.
It's a game of love and war,
who you pick to keep the score.
It's a game if you fight for peace,
the hope for love, a new release.
It's a game of on and off,
how much you can take when it gets rough.
It's getting time for us to pay,
for the twisted game you play.

Aw thanks honey,i just tried to think as a girl like this,even i cried while i was writing this thing

Tash,

I just have a question. How does this have to do with

[Family Abuse, and having no where to turn]

I'm just confused. If you can tell me, please do!

it's a mix of things... family secret, fear, confusion.. I can't really catogorize it I'm afraid. If it is not suitable, you must disqualify me.. I'ts absolutely your contest.. I didn't mean to mess it up in anyway by posting an unuseful poem. :)

Tash,

I'm not going to disqualify you. I just really didn't know exactly now I see it in a different way and it's amazing. (I'm sorry for being rude if I was, I was just having a bad day earlier.)

Tash,

I'm not going to disqualify you. I just really didn't know exactly now I see it in a different way and it's amazing. (I'm sorry for being rude if I was, I was just having a bad day earlier.)

haha, you weren't being rude at all! :) I can understand how it might not be understood completely at first.. I didn't want to mess it up in here you see.
I'm sorry to hear you had a bad day :( XxX:D

tasha

Like I always say. Different day same sh-t. So yeah. I'm having a better day today. So YAY!

^^^
I hope you're alright.

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This is the best I could do.. But, I wanted to give it shot, because you were so nice in the comment you left to encourage me. I hope you at least like it. =]
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He Took Me To The Cemetary

A moonless shadow falls over the lands,
As over my mouth is pressed a hand.
Dragging me forward to a path unknown,
All as a moonless shadow is shone.

Fourth from within shrieks a terrible cry;
This angel of a girl doesn't want to fly.
Struggling, bewildered, something takes place,
Upon stone and grass; this girls a waste.

He said: "Mark are my words, be still,"
For moon and stars are dreams fulfilled.
Thoughtful nature soon protests
Upon something so fully grotest.

He took me to the cemetary,
Where the dead are buried,
To steal my soul and existence,
On the night I replied with no resistance.

xTheEcstasyoFSuicidex

Wow Ecastasy. Really good. I'm glad you decided to do the poem after all.

^^^
Erm.. Thanks. =s
I really didn't like it, I'll be honest.
I hope you have another contest so I can show my true colors..? XD Lol.
But, thank you. It means a lot.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

I will soon/

Any more takers? Not hard to do. Please do it, I've seen many of your guys's talent, you guys can do anything.

Okay those who have reserved a poem, if you cannot turn yours in please tell me. George Allmighty, You've had weeks to rewrite your poem, and that goes for all of you that reserved a poem.

This is George...
I rewrote it.
And, just edited it on the side....
It's done..
:|
Or did I do it wrong again!?!??!

:|
If I did, I'll change it again.
Sorrryyyy. :/

Teriaerifrica,

Your in the contest. Congrats! :]. Yes it fits the rules. I'm sorry I gave you a hard time before.

Everyone else needs to turn in their poems now.

HELLO!!

i think u shud just say if ppl dont hand theirs in u will mark without them!! xx

I ALREADY said that if they don't turn in their poems they will not be able to do the contest.

I ALREADY said that if they don't turn in their poems they will not be able to do the contest.

Okay. I am closing this contest.

If you do not turn in your poem today, you will not be able to do my other contests.

It's fair to me and those who worked hard to actually turn in their poems, and it shows that if you could do other contests and couldn't even get your poem in this one means you will not be able to do that for my other contests.

im so sorry but a family member has died and i wont be able to turn in my poem.

i loved the title by the way;; and i really looked forward to entering... but im flying to edmonton this evening.

sorry.

Im sorry Consending;heart,

I'll take you off the list so you can join my other contests if you want to.

Thanks for telling me so I didn't get you out of writing poetry for my contests.

I hope everything goes well!

I think everyone on this site already knows that i haven't completed a lot of contests i've entered due to losing all my inspiration due to my nan's death.
I've posted on a lot of threads and asked for a lot of advice over the past two weeks about it so if you want to take me off your list do so. I have bigger things to worry about right now.
Sorry