TITLES CONTEST!!!! (joint contest)

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hey guys whats up? me and my friend "becca ♥ " are making a contest.

RULES:
1. title must be incorperated some where in the poem.(the title must be as is with no words in between..
EX. title is "starry night"
correct: what a starry night
incorrect: what a starry pretty night)
2. NO PROFANITY
3. must be at least 10 lines and no more than 40
4. MUST BE NEW
5. MUST reserve title before submitting!!!
6. must rhyme

*TITLES*
- take my hand(RESERVED:Condescending;;Heart.)
- moving forward(RESERVED:Broken Fallen Angel)
- more than love(RESERVED:*Gem*)
- over the sidewalk(RESERVED:♥ *`Ciao`* ♥)
- slipping through
- running to you
- dont bother angel(RESERVED:Afraid of the Dark)
- ripped up
- strange way
- fading memory(RESERVED:∫Bëløveđ∫)
- wrong way out
- long way down(RESERVED:*Charisma*)
- drowning in apathy(RESERVED:My Decadent)
- place of recognition
- fleeing remedy
- waiting for the sky to fall(RESEVED:>liquid dreams)
- lose it all
- rest of your life(RESERVED:~*Who Cares?*~ (He Does)]
- let it all go(RESERVED:Poonam)
- always alone
- color in the grey(RESERVED:George Curious Allmighty)
- crying for too long
- i go on
- underneath my skin
- how to bleed(RESERVED:disturbed one)

****the contest ends tuesday, january 30. at 5pm

*FOLLOW THE RULES!!!!!!

***AWARDS***
1st: 20 comments
2nd: 12 comments
3rd: 8 comments
4th: 4 comments(only if all titles are reserved!)

those are the total amounts of comments you will recieve. we will each comments half the amount.

**thanks and good luck :D!!!

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just want to let everyone know before the contest starts that i am the other judge for this contest.

so many good ones...can I have Long Way Down..PLEASE!
Thanks!
Charisma*

okay to Poestess you didnt reserve the title before submitting it so its not fair we specifically said in the rules you had to so im sorry but your poem doesnt count

if you want you can reserve a poem and then enter it but this poem wont count

i'll take "waiting for the sky to fall"

take my hand please.

Long Way Down

Love has taken me higher
Than heaven itself has been
I really believed they were lies
But I'm proven wrong again

My feet are walking on air
That not even birds have flown
And my eyes still can't focus
On everything they've been shown

But one thing they see clearly
Is you flying here with me
Keeping me unafraid
On anything that could be

A million paces above earth
And my mind doesn't care at all
Your hand steadys my heart
Promising to catch if I fall

As I tilt my head towards land
I know it's a long way down
But your eyes say I'm safe
As long as you are around

By: Charisma*

Can I reserve more than love please?

over the sidewalk please!
Ciao ~

can i have rest of your life plz? thnx:)

underneath my skin

and you spelled bleEd wrong. =]

whooops lol thanks :DDD

May I reserve Fading Memory? Thanks

Reserving Let it all go please?

"Drowning in apathy" please!

Drowning In Apathy
© My Decadent

I can hear her sobbing in the quiet dark,
I can feel the faint beat of her heart...

Static eyes staring empty at the floor -
Spiderwebs adorning her broken core,
"All good things to those who wait" they say,
But it's just another lie, 'cause she waited every day.

The room decaying - her chains now rusted,
Her once graceful skin now stained and dusted;
With each second she dies a bit more,
Drowning in apathy and slowly getting sore...

The sun rays feel like poisioned darts of fire -
You said you'll love her always, liar!
Lies that turn to dust alike her broken heart
As you left her all alone in the quiet dark...

I can hear her whispering in the hollow night,
I can feel her giving up on this fight...

Can I reserve don't bother angel please?

DON’T BOTHER ANGEL

Don’t bother angel
Don’t bother with me
I’ve been crying too long,
To be bothered with by thee.

Your heart is strong,
Your nature true,
Mine is too weak,
To be bothered by you.

Don’t bother with me angel,
Although I’m lying still,
To kill my broken soul,
Will take more than that pill.

I am happy here,
So leave me be,
I’ve been crying too long,
To be bothered with by thee.

cheers
Laura

xx
(well i did reserve first)

Color In The Grey.
Thank You. x

Color In The Grey.

I've hidden my soul beneath the cold hard ground.
Driven away those who tend to come around.
The ones that show me love and care
Are the ones that I can hardly bare.
I've searched for ways to disappear.
The only way is through my fear.

Death subsides within my heart.
Slowly tearing my insides apart.
Filling it's hunger with worthless bites.
Gradually stealing my human rights.
As if I'm forfeiting my actual life.
Reality is filling with bitterly strife.

As pain is ripping away my dreams.
I forget happiness, and now it seems..
I have nothing less to say..
Hoping for someone to color in the Grey.
As my life slips further down the road.
And, I'm left alone and freezing cold.

nevermind

Underneath My Skin
-Done.. but ill prolly change it around a bit.

Underneath My Skin.
Your sure you will find
Lies instead of the answers.
And the real truth.
Deciet, you think, will be revealed.

Is there no faith anymore?
Everything that i reveal
You do not believe?
Have you no secrets
Hidden from the world,
From the ones you love..
Me included?

Behind your eyes..
The Stories are told.
Walls could be filled,
Stacked up tall, higher, higher
With your secret wishes, desires:
Fantasies of love and happiness,

Lies you have told us all,
Your living in them now,
Amazing how you can survive, for
Reality has begun to fall.

There's a secret message within this poem.
Can
You
Find
It?

=]

The Rest of your Life?

You said you want to spend the rest of your life,
With me, together as husband and wife.
But after our near-to-breakup fight,
Were you telling me the truth that night?

I don’t know what to believe, my mind or heart,
You’re special to me, have been from the start.
But you need to be happy with us too,
You need to mean it when you say ‘I love you’.

If you don’t want to spend the rest of your life,
With you as a husband, me as your wife.
Why did you bring it up at all?
If all it’d do is lead to our fall…

Last night I was up all night trying to think,
Why you’d say that, leaving me to cry over the sink.
My whole body shook when you said those words,
I was so scared that I nearly fell backwards…

I’m glad we worked through this very hard time,
Even if someday you may no longer be mine.
If someday we do forever part…
Just know that you’ll always have my heart.

~*Who Cares?*~

BTW...person above me..lol i found the secret message! that's so cool!!!

Ooh i want how to bleed plz!!!

the secret message is cool! Very neat!
Charisma*

to Sociopathetic [Lauren] dude!!! that secret message was freekin amazing. i love how you did that. but uhm yeah i cant count the poem because one of the rules said it has to rhym and that means the entire poem. so sorry but still that was good. you can try again if you would like.

Mines almost done. Am i looking to hard for this secret message and it's right in front of me =(

Let it all go

no matter what plays with your sight
forget whatever it may do to you
dont let it break down your might
listen to me though, just let it all go

she may do what he wishes
he might play with your mind
she'll be stealing your kisses
listen to me though, just let it all go

they'll try to break a spirit like yours
trying hard to make you fail, fall apart
they'll close all your open doors
listen to me though, just let it go

they cant do a thing to break you
none can take that which is yours
dont do anything you dont want to
remember, listen to me, just let it all go

the poem does rhyme, but i understand now you meant like every stanza. mine simply rhymed where i felt it was needed. oh well. i guess ill delete my poem and let someone else have the title. i dont think i want to write another with the same title. lol.

---to those who got the secret message, Congrats.. that is if you ACTUALLY got it. alot of people said they did. but they were wrong. =P

i think i did..lol. i really do. if im wrong..-sigh- then ill be sad because i thought i was smart 4 once lol.

to Sociopathetic [Lauren] dont think the poem was bad or anything because it wasn't its just when we stated that rule we ment that the entire poem had to rhym. so sorry. nice try though. and if you dont want to write one with that title you can try another one?

sorry again :/

10 DAYS LEFT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Over the Sidewalk [Lyrics]

Over the sidewalk, many feet fly
Shadows pass over from something up high
Talking and whispering, laughing rings out
This is what life is really about

Baby put some music on
And let's dance all night long
Tell me dear if this is what you wanna hear

Life goes by and people move on
If I'm not right, then let me be wrong
Hold me close, or let me go
Fly away or just come back for more

Baby put some music on
And let's dance all night long
Tell me dear if this is what you wanna hear

Over the sidewalk, many people pass on by
Some may laugh and others may cry
You'd never know what they think about
Unless you ask them and they let it all out

Baby put some music on
And let's dance all night long
Tell me dear if this is what you wanna hear

Baby put some music on
And let's dance all night long
Tell me dear if this is what you wanna hear

♣ Lucky ♣

hope it's okay (ciao xx)

c`mon the more titles filled the more chances to win!!! :)

to ♣ Lucky ♣ um.. we didnt put this is the rules and we should have.. but we would really prefer if you put your song in poetry form.. and from the way you have it set up its should be an easy fix just take away where it says verse 1,2,ect and where is says chorus just put the lines of the chorus there rather than writing the word "chorus"

pleaseandthankyou!

This poem absolutely sucks...but oh well...

How to bleed(Acrostic)

Hold
Onto
Wrist

Tightly
Oppress

Blood
Loss
Ensures
Early
Death

can i reserve moving foward plz..

- you should probably change in the first post that i reserved it though.

=P

~*~"Waiting for the sky to fall..."~*~

Waiting for your fragrance
Waiting for your touch
I just want you back
Is that asking too much?

Ever since you've gone
All I've done is cry
Waiting for you
By watching the sky

So I wait for you
Though you won't come at all
Waiting for you is like
Waiting for the sky to fall.

Copyright (C): Rhianna

Moving Foward Without You

Didn't we promise to stick together for better or worse?
Didn't you say that you would love me forever?
I thought that you would hold my hand,moving us together forever
But look at us now
You moving ahead of me
You broke your promise

But wait,
You made me learn that promises were made to be broken
You made me realize that I am alone in this world
And just to think..
I loved you too
But yet even when I loved you you hurt me with all the things you said

Now I'm looking ahead,
But your in my way
But since you broke my promise
Your holding someone better
Better than I ever was
And I know that you will add mitt it too

If you look at all the poems I wrote about you
You will think that I am jealous of you.
Just how you accused "Waterfall"
I'm not jealous of you
Not at all
But I am furious at you

You hurt me
Left me there in pain
And i had to tell you of my pain
Now you are sorry.
Tsk,Tsk
I am not going to forgive you this time.
I forgave you so many times

Seeing you in my way makes me move forward
So guess what,
I'm moving forward without you
You and your broken promises

~*Jazzy~*