2 for me... however many for you :)

hii.

i just put up two new poems.

if you comment on both of them

then ill surely return the favor

on however many you want me to.

done

can you please comment
- grow old with you
- dearest father

and dont be afriad to critique.. you can never be too harh if your trying to help

:) pleaseandthankyou!

done...could you please comment these:

*drowned in tears
*i love the way
*devil in the wrong place

thanx..

Done! :]

Please do these:
*Let's Do The Atom Bomb Dance
*Ice-cream Love
*The Poetree

(critique is always welcome)

thank you guys for the comments.

i really appreciate it.

im gonna comment on the ones you want

when i come back on later.

i promise.

anyone else want some comments

on their poems?

just gotta do me the favor

and i'll return it :)