I'll rate and comment your poems for free......

  • lala
    19 years ago

    Tell me the poem(s) you want me to look at and I'll rate and leave a comment.

    You don't have to read my poems in exchange, but you can if you want. :]

  • Kristina
    19 years ago

    could you please do:

    I Will Never Forget You
    What's On The Inside

    thanks. i'll return the fav!

  • lala
    19 years ago

    Very good poems, nice work! I enjoyed reading them! :)

  • LadyWaszky
    19 years ago

    MY Latest please -underneath my skin.

    ps the secret message is the .. ahh il let you try to figure it out

  • X2892
    19 years ago

    can u do " just what it is" n i'll do one of urs

  • lala
    19 years ago

    you guys are such great poets!!!!!

    and thank you for the comments! :]

  • lala
    19 years ago

    anymore poems you guys want me to read? :]

  • Sandra D
    19 years ago

    can you do a couple of my poems if it's not too much trouble... thanx!!!

    Forever*Yours

  • J Lau
    19 years ago

    Please r/r/c: "Desires", "If Only", "True Feelings" or any that catches your eyes.

    Please and thank you.

    J. Lau

  • Isabelle
    19 years ago

    Could you read 'Ethan', 'Me and you, seems like never.', and 'This love she once knew.' Thanks a lot!

  • ForeverYoung
    19 years ago

    id really like for you to comment on The Healing Ends and Dear Ana You Destroyed Me!
    thank you loads
    xx Shep

  • The Angel of Secrets
    19 years ago

    I'd be cool if you would comment on "A tale of a Schizofrenic Girl."

    You rock my socks.

  • lala
    19 years ago

    please no more until thease are done, thanx! ^^'

  • lala
    19 years ago

    okay, I'm ready for more poems, great work you guys! :]

  • Michelle18
    19 years ago

    could you please r/r/c these:

    *drowned in tears
    *devil in the wrong place
    *i love the way

    thanx

  • lala
    19 years ago

    done ^^, anymore?

  • Curry
    19 years ago

    can you please comment on my poems...i only have 4 poems so it shouldnt take you that long... i will return the favor..thanx

  • Mousie
    19 years ago

    Walking Hand In Hand
    Questions of the Future
    Wild Girl

    thanks, i'll do a couple of yours too.

  • Rona
    19 years ago

    is this offer still open?
    could you please read these poems:
    "Letting Go"
    "Shades of Grey"
    and
    "The Performance"
    please and thank you =)

  • lala
    19 years ago

    ^^ no problem

  • Tricky Daze
    19 years ago

    can you rate mine new thing named Always Loving Him and Erase My Life As You Erase My Pain

  • Italian Stallion
    19 years ago

    Could you please do,

    Loving You (Part 1)

    Thank you, Joe

  • Brittney Follett
    19 years ago

    Your name looks really familar... I would have said Chaotic Mind and Footprints... but I think you have read them. Well if you haven't there they are.. but if not... get whatever catches your eye.

    Thanks Babe

  • lala
    19 years ago

    no more until I'm done with these, please

  • lala
    19 years ago

    okay, I'm ready to continue ^^

  • Italian Stallion
    19 years ago

    Could you please do,

    Loving You (Part 2)

    And

    Loving You (Part 3) - when it is finished and posted

    Thank you, Joe

  • lala
    19 years ago

    no problem, Joe :]
    anyone else?

  • XxFallenxFromxGracexX
    19 years ago

    could you please do
    "My beautiful dog"
    and any others you think are good
    thank u so much!!!
    Luv FallenxFromxGrace xoxo

  • Perfection
    19 years ago

    Read my Sad man, and the other one you dont have to if you dont want to =D. thanks =D

  • David Marshall
    19 years ago

    ''So scared of love''

    Its my newest one, thank you :)

  • BeautifulxMess
    19 years ago

    We Believe
    Dear Diary Part III
    Our Special Place

    Thanksss :)

  • angelina
    19 years ago

    will you read any of my featured poems, please.

    THANK YOU!

  • Robert
    19 years ago

    read any you wish of mine I have read a few of yours and given my opinion take care. Robert...

  • The Queen of Spades
    19 years ago

    I would love if you could look at "It Ends With Goodbye" for me...please and thank you!

  • x.Athame.x
    19 years ago

    If you happen to still possess the time, and of course the desire to do so I would humbly implore that you give a glance to my poems "Kiss on the Cheek" and "Darkness Comes". My thanks.

  • LadyPearl
    19 years ago

    Wow, that's a very generous offer. I'll return the favors as soon as I can.

    -Drowning Bait
    -Breathe in me

  • lala
    19 years ago

    please no more until I'm done with these. I'm so, so sorry for the wait but my computer is sick

  • Brittany C
    19 years ago

    Could you please r/r/c

    You're Back
    and
    A Wonder

    Thanks

  • lala
    18 years ago

    okay........I'm ready to move on

    great poems you guys!