contest about death!!

I would like to withdraw my other poem because it is now obsolete..
My nan died on Sunday and this is a new poem for her..

Xx More Than Just A Nan xX

Nobody warned me about how I would feel
The constant pain, the tears and all the grief
It's almost unbearable to have you gone
But to know you're at peace is a relief

I didn't like to see you in so much pain
You were just waiting for your soul to succumb
I could see in your eyes that you'd had enough
Even though all those tablets made your body numb

It hurts that I wasn't there to hold your hand
And to say I loved you... just one last time
I never got to say my last goodbyes
And to see you safely on your heavenly climb

It's so painful to realise you're not coming back
That I'm never going to see you smile at me again
That fact you won't be there on my wedding day
Is just to much hurt for me to retain

Is it normal for me to feel so utterly lost?
To feel like i've lost a part of my soul?
But I know you're in a much better place now
So I'm trying my best to keep in control

Nanna, I don't know how to put into words
Just how much I loved and cared for you
For you were more than just a relative to me
You were a grandmother, a mom and a best friend too... ©

*Gem*

omg gem.. i feel like crying after reading that poem. i hope you are gonna be ok

My dear Molly
by ~BRiDDY~

We got Molly when she was a little kitten,
and she was the cutest thing around.
She would unravel the toilet paper and climb up the curtains,
then fall asleep without a sound.

The whole family liked to cuddle and play with her,
and oh how she loved the attention!
She would fall asleep absolutely anywhere,
on someone's shoulder or even in the bin.

She grew bigger and bigger every day,
until she was fully grown.
She started to catch rats and birds,
and go out all night on her own.

Molly was definitely a lap cat,
she loved to snuggle up on someone's lap.
But i think she thought the garden,
was the best place to take a nap.

A couple of times Molly went missing,
she even got sick one time.
But she would always return home alive,
except for the night she died.

That night I was woken from my sleep,
and pulled from the comfort of my bed.
I was led into the lounge, and what I saw there,
was my molly lying dead.

My family were gathered around her stiff body,
and told me she had been hit by a car.
She had tried to drag herself back home,
but couldn't make it that far.

My tears were uncontrollable,
and my sobs were making me insane.
Molly had died at only four-years-old,
and she would have been through a lot of pain.

It's been over two years since Molly's been gone,
and I'm hating our time apart.
And although she was only a cat,
she will always hold a place in my heart.

~ R.i.P Molly, I will never forget you. ~

ok i will be judging tomorrow so if you want 2 submit a poem hurry!

Deat's way

He waits in the wing
while you get live going full swing
then he pounces on you
wraps his arms around you
and takes you away
that's death's way
Your family is filled with sorrow
filled with tears they can't swallow
They try to go on with plans they own
but they are blown
everything has come undone
you were tooken before you had begun
Goodbye my friend
this is the end
We say bye
and wonder why
it has to be this way
It is sad that he took you away
but that is death's way

ok i have the results.......

1st place = lucky

2nd place= TheEcstasyOfSuicide

3rd= gem

congratulations! to everyone.... ok..the winners may leave the titles of the poems they want me 2 do...and everyone that didnt win may leave two titles of the ones they want commented.

hey can u please comment:

- never give up
- There Must be Some Place better

Thanks, this was a great contest!! xx

sure...im gonna do that right now.

ok done..

cool, thank you so much :)

great job you guys!

Woo woo! Congratulations winners!

These two poems please michelle!
-Basilisk
-With You, I Believe

Thank you!!!!

Awe, thank you for second place.. I'm very excited. =]
I'm not sure what poems you have read of mine, so I'd be honored if you just choose whatever caught your eye. =]

Thank you for all the comments and votes in advanced...and the place on your favorites.xx

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Congrats Winners. =]

As for my two, i dont really care. =]

congrats winners and for my 2 u may choice any of them that catchs your eye.

Thank you for the placing. It means a lot.
Could you please comment..

Intoxicated Whispers
Why Are Rubber Ducks Yellow?
Wild At Heart
My Whole World
Unsaid Things

Thanks againa and congrats everyone.. xx

ok..it might take me a while 2 get all of these done..but i promise i will get it done.

i judged these poems on the flow and the ryhming scheme..also on which poems i thought were more about death.

Omg! Thank you sooooo much!!!! (I changed my name)

wow first place! omg 15 poems...
*`Missing You
*`Taking Over Me
*`She's Finally Over You
*`Ripped Paper Hearts / I Will Never Belong To You
*`Candy
*`Wishing You Were Somehow Here Again
*`My Heart [-Parquette-]
*`Blackened Red Rose
*`Not A Textbook Romance
*`So Much For My Happy Ending [Damn Mistakes]
*`Here's To My Ending On Loving You {Lyrics}
*`Signed A Crimson Red
*`Dead Of A Heartbreak / How Can You Still Call Me Beautiful
*`your choice!
*`your choice

lol thanks for this, it means a lot to me!!!!

♥Ciao

ok i commented on almost everyone's but i still have some to do...and some people didnt tell me which poems they want commented so i will choose which ever one catches my eye.

ok done....now i just have to comment on those who didnt leave titles.

ok done everyone...if i missed your poems by accident just let me know and i will comment them.. thanx.. and congratulations everyone...

~michelle~