Help!

ok my friend thinks this poem that i wrote isn't that good could someone tell me what they think.

title- What you've done to me

lol????? okay, i wil do, but just coz ur a m8!

I really don't knoe which one your talking about, but I commented on your last one.

And if you could do one of mine, that would be stellar. I really don't mind which you do.

Please and thank you.