>>Disgust

Have you ever been disgusted by someone?
Something?
Maybe society has driven you insane...

Well my dear poets and poetesses here is the place where you're voice shall be heard!

If you would like your poem to be taken to the test and your tlaent to be observed then here is the place for you!

There are no rules you can post as many poems as you want!

If your ahving trouble figuring out a title here are some to get you goin'...

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~ Delusional
~ Social sacrifice
~ Broken Conscience
~ Fragile Friend
~ Acid Hate
~ Famous Last Words
~ Raising Hell
~ Going Under
~ Blood Music
~ Hollywood
~ Cupola
~ Fractured

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The contest will be finished after 10 poems have been submitted, after the novelty has worn off or on the 27th of January.

thank you and get posting!!!

~Unfriendly encounter~
By Melissa

All the cynics light up their cigarettes
and blow smoke at my half eaten heart,
I stupidly laugh at their ugliness
as misery undresses herself in blame,
unaware my own two hands were funny to sin...

Eyes shaped like haunted willow trees
blow haphazardly in the forgotten wind,
cruelty drools off those pathetic tongues
as kindness sticks between pearly white teeth
and I'd love to call those scamps names,
but only fools call fools fools
so maybe I'll just write about their disgrace...

Its Murder..

When you go to work each day
Do you listen for the cries?
Do you hear the silent screams they make,
Everytime they die?

When you kill those innocent children,
Do you consider their holy souls?
Do you wonder what they could've done,
If they had a chance to accomplish their goals?

You say they're only flesh,
Only muscle skin and bone.
But they could have been someone
If they had the chance to grow.

Remember that little one you killed today?
He could've been the new pope.
He could've changed the way the world works.
But thats something we'll never know.

That little boy could have found the cure,
To cancer, AIDS or more.
He could have saved a million lives,
He could have ended all Wars.

When you stop their hearts from beating
Do you think of what you've done?
Its just as though you've shot a child,
With a legal machine gun.

Before you kill those innocent kids.
Think of how you're such a fool
The government's tricked you into thinking
That this murder isn't cruel....

So Sad...
by Sociopathetic [Lauren]

It's sad really, how
kids are running around like robots
buying all this and that
spending over 100 bucks
for the 'stylish new hat'

It's sad really, how
being a clone seems to be the trend
thats lasted for all of time
follow the leader, forget your true self,
don't you dare step out of line

It's sad really, how
girls outfits seem to be shrinking,
for all the guys to drool
and all those popular, rich b.tches
seem to be ruling the schools

It's sad really, how
All because of their daddy's money ,
these girls get to be the *best*?
to pick whos worth the time of day
and to torment the rest.

It's sad really, how
no one can show their true colors,
instead they *have to have* that sweater,
from abercrombie and finch
and they dont even know any better.

It's sad really, how
i seem to be the only real person,
the only one who seems to realize
how every trendy b.tch is f.cking fake,
and how M T V is telling everyone stupid lies .

I call "Acid Hate"
I'll have it in Asap.
Thank you for such a great title.

Guys like the one described below, DISGUST ME!!
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In a dimly lit room,
Surrounded by bars,
And drunken demons,
Sat a beautiful child.

A young girl,
Blond hair,
Blue eyed beauty,
Grinning with no regrets.

A smirk of success,
She got you back,
She said she would,
Remember.

That one night,
A couple months ago,
You killed her,
Shattered her heart.

You crushed her world,
Letting it crumble,
Through stone cold fingers,
Mercilessly.

Over her shoulder,
She yelled through tears,
â??You'll regret that you lied,
And you too shall die.â??

Her intentions were clear,
She wanted you to suffer,
She wanted you to feel,
Every inch of her pain.

You deserved it,
You cheated,
You lied,
You promised.

"I love you,
Now and forever,"
You always said,
Faking a smile.

Soon she realized,
Your lies,
Your promises,
To other girls.

Saying they will
Forever be yours,
Treating them
All the same.

In the end,
Treating them like crap,
Like they are all the same,
There to feed your needs.

She developed,
Pure hatred,
For you,
And those alike.

Vowed to hate,
And seek revenge,
On those jerks,
Who tormented her.

Even if,
It led her to this:
A jacked up cell,
In a jacked up world.

She had to do it,
Not just for her,
But those other girls,
She drew a gun.

She left you a note,
On your car window,
Saying to meet her,
One last time.

That night,
She confronted you,
Whispering,
One last word.

"Good-bye."

I hope I can post explicit...

Hi... you've probably not seen the angry side of my personality unless you've gotten on my bad side... this poem is to someone in my school who likes to pick on people... you all know what kinda person I'm talking about... after all, you've either been a victim or a bully at least once in your life... anyway, lol, she thinks she can do as she pleases just because she went to a special school... (special school my ass.. I didn't go to the top schools in the state by looking pretty... I didn't copy everything like ~she~ did... well, I gotta stop venting, I suppose! This is just a precaution: much swearing and hate!!!
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F*** You
by: ∫Bëløveđ∫
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You say you're pretty
I agree
(Pretty... ugly)
Nanana

You tie your hair up
In a bun
And say you're sexy
(You're just that stupid)

You won't shut up
So just go f***
Yourself
(I hate you so bad)

I hate the way you
Joke around
Cause it ain't funny

Go complain
About your butt
And leave us alone

Cause no one wants
You here, Ms. Bossy
Just go away
(F*** you, leave us alone)

You're a ton of
Smelly sh*t
That no one needs

You think you're cute
And they all say
You're born that way
(Yeah, right, b****)

Go take your makeup
That's from the mall
And throw it straight
Into the wall

Cause you ain't worth it
(Ain't worth it)
And I don't care
(F*** you, b****)

Don't matter what you wear
You still are ugly
In your own
Filthy, innocent way

Maybe someday
You'll wake up
To find the world
Ain't your stage

Cause your singing
Really sucks
And for the sh*t you give me
Take it and leave

Cause I ain't asking
For you masking
Within a masquerade
In some f***ing ugly place

Cause you ain't worth it
(Ain't worth it)
And I don't care
(F*** you, b****)

Your nasty habit
Isn't too fair

Cause you ain't worth it
(Ain't worth it)
And I don't care
(F*** you, b****)
I'll just pretend that
You're not there

To you and all of your pretty (ugly) friends, b****...

For forcing people into things...

For hurting those who are different...

F*** you.

Teenage Dilemma
by ∫Bëløveđ∫

Teenage Dilemma

Torn between love and lust, a teenage dilemma

My sister has told me stories of such bad luck
To be tricked into lust instead of love
Losing it to someone you barely know
You're blinded and thinking you'll stay forever so

To not know the truth, saying love instead of like
Silent victims wonder, reaching their own plight
A tunnel of darkness ever so confusing
When it feels like you're winning you seem to be losing

What a teenage dilemma... (sigh)
Lock up innocent hearts, throw away the key
Trade it in for "appeal", that's what bothers me
Why would people do this... like it's so special?

I swear, my friends and their buds were going out
They told me what they did, and in contradiction did I shout,
"What do you think you're doing, what's wrong with you?"
They think they have such little to lose

Still... how could graduated children be in such a dilemma?
I used to think the world was safer
But I hear bad words on the TV, see bad things in real life
Barely anyone these days even takes the time

What happened to fairy tales, where have they gone?
Why are people in these illusions?
The story's turned out wrong
If only people could make their love strong

Instead everyone seems to think making it will have people stay
No one seems to notice this is just a little game
Get them for an hour, have a one night stand
People think it's cool by the media's demand

I'm telling you, you need to know for sure
You and your lover as BF/GF should be pure
If you'll love them forever, you should at least love first
Get married, move out, be experienced to own a house

If you've been dirty and tainted, it's okay
There's always new, fresh starts
Just forgive yourself and purify your heart
So that there's room for true love to stay.

This poem is about my disgust/disappointment in society, humanity, and warfare. 'Man created weather, then complained about the rain.' -Cold Mountain

War For Peace

When shadows fall upon the floor
And secrets break upon the glass
When shells wash away the shore
And all that will, has come to pass

Time will fade away, just observe
As the hourglass fills its base
Time will fade away, you swerve
As the wheels slip on stolen space

The scream of an infant fosters
He holds his final breath in agony
The reality thickens...these imposters
He gazes upon death without plea

For who may claim they speak
When all that is heard is forgotten?
For who can turn the other cheek
When all that is tasted has rotten?

Overcome the simplicity of life
The underlying cause of everything
Overcome the dissension of strife
The purpose on a vulture's wing

This Great War for peace has begun
And ended in one single stroke
This sword has seen no freedom won
And blood fell when he awoke

All we conceive to be legitimate
Has taken from our fateful purpose
All we know to be pure and fit
Has risen against our eternal bliss

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3 poems to go..

Killing Me Softly

How many of us LIVE as we want?
Without regret,IGNORANCE or their mistakes
Are they their FAULTS or just believe in fate
Nobody is happy EVEN they've anything they want

Pass my days crying IT helps me to live
The blackness of you SUCKS,i know it's real
xxxxxx
What people find GOOD,made a question
Dis philosophy goes ON,my secret pages
I got mumbled the OTHER woman that she's right
Yes,i look forward the Day,I'll end up my life
xxxxxx

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read the head letters Caps-locked(life is good) and the words Caps-Locked(live ignorance,faults even it sucksxgood on other dayx),liked it?

Thank you for giving me the air to write again..It felt wonderful getting this out. Thank you.
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Acid Hate

My ex-fiancee cheated on me. This is for her. Enjoy.
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Press your body close to his, lust for what you cannot confide,
Tease me with your thoughtless, deathly lips, look around through eyes of cyanide.

To my ears that wish not to hear -
"I do not love him" you spit and plea,
"You are my love" you lie awake; you're body will not satisfy me.

Press this hate deep into your skin of forgotten, buried lies.
Tell me of the night you spent, uttering sexual cries.

Piercing left-overs is all we are, moving beneath your frame,
Sex appeal and all the lies,
when you finish your laughing game.

"I want a child, a miracle, someone to love me and share ecstasy";
Spread my arms and stab my heart, take away my dignity.

Take this acid, full of my burning love and hate,
Find the words buried deep by fate . . .

You're never happy with lies covering your eyes,
You're never happy with your sexual cries.

So press your body closer to his and lust for what you cannot confide,
Tease me with your cheating lips; look through eyes of cyanide.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

uno moreo

C'mon people!

Broken Doll

I see your pretty face,
One I wish to disgrace,
Follow you to your home,
Soon to be your eyes were sewn

You will scream for my mercy,
This will scar you will see,
Mercy HA! I give none,
Never will you touch the sun

Your body is ripped and torn,
Your mind is now filled with scorn,
Raping you for my own joy,
Broke your face like its a toy

Spitting on your undug grave,
A path to hell I will now pave,
Rape you mind you wont forget,
Now that your future is unset

For you nothing will I ever care,
All you can do is stare,
Your eyes forever now are glass,
No one helps as they walk past

Fucked and beaten like a doll,
Now that I have stole your soul,
And your face I shall smother,
Now I'm off to kill another

© Copyright 2005 By: Grotesque Angel

This is complicated to explain but....this poem is based on the song "Pretty" by Korn and the story behind it disgusts me to this day.
Everyone should listen to it.

GA

The contest is being judged but if you do wish to enter another poem please do quickly.

- Emma

wow. these are good poems. i lost. haha.

WInners:

1/ Grotesque Angel
2/ Daernerys Stormborn (the sphinx)
3/ Sociopathetic

you will each recieve at least 4 c/r's

thank you for entering

Awesome!!!! Thank you so much. You can r/r/c any poems on my Favorite's List.

Thanks so much. =]

Any would be fine .=]

just wondering- which poem i submitted won?

Lol, thanks. I guess i have to write alot of new poems now then? lol

Cheers,
GA

PS: I really liked everyone elses poems. :)