The Unseen (Double Comments)

Hello there everyone. Please read, rate and comment on my poem 'The Unseen', it is really short but means a lot. I will double the comments for you. Just leave the names of the 2 poems for me. Thank you!

I've read/commented your piece.

I liked it and it's originality. Keep it up.

If it wouldn't be too much to ask, could you read/comment "Zero" and "Wake up!"?

Thanks,
-Kenneth G. @ Faceless Mirror.

wow.. amazing poem.. i really liked it..

can you please r/r/c

- fragile mindset (triolet)
- picture in a frame (acrostic)
- grow old with you
- dearest father
- under the influence

I am r/r/c-ing your piece now. If you could please return the favor on my poem "Kiss on the Cheek" it would be most appreciated.