Comment for comment plus 2

Hey...

I'm offering a pretty reasonable deal here.

You comment on one of mine - I'll do three of yours
You comment two of mine - I'll do four of yours
You comment three of mine - I'll do five of yours
Etc.

I'm looking for comments on two poems in particular

Fairground
Even the furniture bleeds (edited)

If you want to comment on any others, that's fine.

Thanks in advance.

Leave titles below, if you don't leave titles I'll just take my pick.

Just take your pick of mine - I commented on Even the furniture bleeds (edited).

Thanks. :-)

i just read the two poems you asked .. great job
can you please r/R/c

- grow old with you
- fragile mindset
- when a loved one dies
- under the influence

Very good becca.
I'd already commented on "under the influence" so I did "dearest father" instead.

i commented on two.

do any four of mine that catch your eye. [:

hi. I was wondering If you could read my latest?

Will do! You can comment on any of mine if you feel like it...I don't mind if you don't...I'll just read yours!

wow you are a great poet! you're on my favorites!