Requesting Readers:

great poem! don't be discouraged by what some people may say!

well that's good to hear. [:

i know what you mean though. one day i was just joking and seeing if i could actually vote for one of my poems and was shocked that I could! A number does not decide on what the true meaning of the poem is.

I would say more, but my grilled cheese sandwhiches are probably burning right now because i have left them unattended.

i hope you write more in the future though, I love your work. [:

i just did. i put a comment on the poem. and i stand by what i said in it.

everything you said in it was true and there are no further words that i really need to add.

you're a superb writer.

you are your own worst critic? if yes, then i can agree. i find that i am more critical on my own poetry than anyone else's.

i think a lot of ppl are like that. i am one of them. i will have a read of a few of em.

david

a lot of those poems are humorous, yet there are a few duds.

i have on in that section, wrote it for a poetry contest. I doubt it will win much, but it's worth a shot.

ppl, plzzz come read my poems and comment them. i really want to get some feedback on what u think of my writing, that way i can improve

thanks in advance

~Violet~