Awesome Is What We Aim For

Wow it ends on my birthday!

wooo!

this is one of my fav bands so i have to do a poem, i think ill do the fourth drink instinct please.
i love this band!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'll do finger twist and split

Paige
much emo love

I'll do Lyrical Lies.

:]

OHH!! ii love cute is what we aim for!! hahah i was supposed to go to their concert and it got canceled :(

ill take teasing to please

TEASING TO PLEASE
by Becca ♥

She puts herself down
She's teasing to please
Insecure, she hides it well
She does what she needs

She vomits up her feelings
To keep her slim physique
She does what she needs
And she’s okay she is so cheap

Yet, all the girls, they hate her
For being such a h o e
She just wants to be their friends
But they will never know

And all the boys, they love her
But not for whom she is
Only for what she does
For the pleasure she gives

Cause we all want to be wanted
And we all want to be loved
So she’s okay with the false façade
Of happiness in what she does

So every night she goes out
And she does what she needs
Taking out all her pain
By teasing to please

If only someone told her
How beautiful she was
And that she’d be much more
If she stopped doing what she does

But no one ever reaches out
No one gives her the time of day
Nobody wants to be her friend
Or to tell her to stop her ways

So she continues on her way
And doing what she does
Cause people will do anything
To feel secure and loved

i'll take...i put the metro in metronome

hey i edited my poem.. idk if you read it yet but i just wanted to tell you so you re-read it.. :D

if its okay to edit.. if not its fine

There's a Class for This Please. =]]]]]]

yeah c`mon.. no ones entered their poem but me
:( hehe lol

i think im going to drop out of this one...i wrote a poem but it sounds really stupid and has no flow and chance to win so...i'll give others a chance

sorry

Question- Can this be a song? like lyrics?
because what i have in my head seems like a song.

=]

^^^
I'm with her.
And I'm trying to think of something for "Sweat the Battle Before the Battle Sweats You".. I'll try to do that one.
But, I have lyrics for it...

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Not my best, but it's interesting. I hope you enjoy.
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Sweat The Battle Before The Battle Sweats You

Split the image of burning fascades and utter disgust,
Hold your head high with attempt and dripping trust,
Becareful in the field of dying truth and lust,
Whisper words around that need to be discussed.

Like a forgotten prize, clutch pity to your side,
Multicolored mask that you cannot hide,
A few million eyes peer in glancing at your lies;
Swords and battles take time to collide.

You're your own failure, despising whore,
There's nothing you can do, much like before,
Drop your guns, get out into the battle and gore,
Fall to the ground, crawl around and explore.

Sweat this battle, before it sweats you,
Dance with the dead bodies, discover a new hue
Move faster, work harder, and bid adieu
Turn what you know into more than you can chew.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

The fourth drink instinct

You look so much better
After these drinks,
So much better,
But it’s just the fourth drink instinct.

I’m smiling on the outside,
And cut up on the in,
The drink is swirling,
My mind is whirling
And I begin my sins.

You drive me back to mine,
But the car would have done.
We haven’t got that much time
But we can still have some fun.

I’m too pissed to think,
It’s the drink instinct,
I’m standing on the brink,
The fourth drink instinct.
The only reason you’re here.

And there’s no need for protection,
Or any sign of false affection,
I know your motives,
You don’t care for mine,
They only stem from spirits
and red red wine.

Let’s cut out the small talk,
Not that you would have bothered,
Don't even try to guess
what's going on backstage,
in pointless conversation,
let's not engage
You’re so much older,
I’m underage.

I won’t shed a single tear
I’m so more sincere
Than I appear,
We have no time for fear.

So in the morning this won’t count,
Let’s agree not to remember each other,
No pointless hopes of lovers.
No memories of it.
Just dirty sheets
And a ringing head,
Just a wasted night,
And an empty bed.

(i'm really disappointed with this but i just couldn't seem to get anything better out of myself, sorry)

i swear ill get this is ASAP.

i kinda forgot about it..... o.o

but i have winter break! so itll get done.. -hopefully-

haha. I just wanted to say wonderful idea for a contest and I love the name of the contest. It's cute. :]

Does the line have to be somewhere in the poem? cuz if it doesnt then i'll just submit mine..

ok...umm...beware...this really sucks

I put the 'metro' in metronome

Let your heart go,
Let it pulse to the beat,
Get out on the floor,
Dont let yourself cheat,

The musics throbbing,
Will you just sit out,
Or be lively,
Stand up and shout,

How low can you go,
Make your hands hit the floor,
Come on baby,
I'll show you whats in store

Wait., but it was suppossed to end tomorrow!

=[

i was gonna enter! =[

lol what does commended mean...nvm i'll look it up

congrats to the others

*looks up commended*

ahh thanks lol

I won?
Awe, thank you!
I was beating myself up trying to write a poem for this... because "Sweat The Battle Before It Sweats You" really stuck out to me and I saw no one was taking it...So I kept writing and writing until I came up with something I thought you'd like.
I'm really glad you did. =]
Thank you so much
And congradulations to the others. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex