help! does this sound desperate? or make any sense???

what the hell is this?

If that is a letter to someone you 'like/love', please don't send it.

I think 'The World Fell...' and the rest of the universe can tell you why.

Umm...Whats wrong with it?
I don't see anything really.
I actually wrote something along the lines of this to my ex. And it was over a year ago that we had broke up. But I'm only 14...So who cares.

If it was a poem I'd give you a 6 for feelings , but as a letter, Id sugest you keep it locked away. I,ve been in the same situation and I e'mails someone how I felt and my world ended up crashing down. Another person wrote a letter like this at school and the letter got passed around there friends, very embarrissing

wow. i think i know how you feel. ive liked this guy for 5 years, and we dated for a little while but broke up because we didnt see each other enough. now i see him all the time and i think i love him...

i wouldnt send this, it would just complicate things, especially the last note. however it was good to get your feelings out, and im gonna do the same thing, then delete it. (in my e mail). after he broke up with me (actually he had my friend do it for him and it really made me angry), i did a roleplay with two of my friends where one was the girl who did the "break up" part and the other was the guy. it was a good way to get all my feelings out and they were really supportive. i still really think i love him, but im starting to get over my heartache, and hopefully you will too.

Love (or dont)
Allanah

PS if you read my profile, he was the last guy i dated and it was a year ago.

I actually liked it I would give it to my baby if he ever broke my heart.I like it and if u wont to give it to him gon head,cause I know how u feel cause if my baby ever broke my heart I dont know what I would do!