Free Comment from Lauren. =] (i am evil .. hear me rawr)

CLOSED.

I'll do amap(as much as possible) tonight., and finish tomorrow. =]

Thanks!!

xxzz

Yep Sure. =]

I will add you to my list.
- im getting off for the night.

but i will do these SUNDAY

(tomorrow i have a festival to go to. so i may not be able to get on..)

Read any of mine under dark sad or depressing poems it will be interesting to hear what u think

titles. or no cigar.

can you please comment my poem untitled i just wrote it
and i love you thank you very much love always linda xoxoxoxox

ok. but i will be commenting on sunday.

.. You thingy made me laugh.. Darwin that was uncalled for..

Anyways...

I'm not sure if this would be a .. what did you call it.. 'Also: if your poem contains the bad,sad,glad or like. i will shoot you. =]
or just not read it. or maybe rant at you about actual poems.'

But hey, I've gotten kudos on this one:

Chaotic Mind

Are you up for the challenge?

Thanks Babe

Who could possibly pass up a generous offer? haha. I would really appreciate it if you read 'They Tell Me'. Its pretty wierd. But I don't care. Thank you very much..
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Alright, so I just actuallr read your post. the other one was more about society, but some say it was somewhat pessimistic. I think it'll be worth your while. If not, Ive got two recent ones you can choose from. They're both somewhat sad.

Close.

=]

And darwin- if you would like to offer some advice on my own poems. do it in the poems. not on my thread. this thread is an offer to comment on other's poems, not for you to comment upon mine. although it doesn't seem as though your poems are amazing since your rating is in the 2's. and if mine are a 5, and are crap, then everyone here must rate anything halfway decent atleast a 4! and yours are 3's and 2's wow. you must not have any talent!

=]

Thanks. =}

uhm wow....i dont want to do this. i was just reading what you wrote. and your not very nice. what is your problem? and yeah yours are fives because only 3 people voted on them. and if i remember correctly your poem was a 2.3? or 3.2 or something? yeah it must have not been all that good then huh? your dont need to go offf saying things like that. if people dont like your poems get over it. its life hunny. dont go off saying hurtful things to other people just because your insecure about yourself.

I know this is closed but if anyone reads it, I must say that I agree with Lauren, no one should post or even comment things like that. When you critique it's supposed to be helpful, not hurtful. Ratings aren't what's important, it's learning how to better your skills as a writter.

marcella

to marcella. if you read what darwin said he didnt say anything wrong. he jsut stated something that was actually kind of true. but what lauren was saying was out of line. she was saying stuff about ratings so she technically started it.

actualyl elizabeth. if you knew how much crap darwin has given me. i am so fed up with him. hes been starting with me for like 2 days now. everythign i do or say he attacks me because of it. and did you read his posts? seriously.

kay well im sorry if he's giving you bullshit but your just as bad for giving it back. so he wants to be an ass and say stuff about your work then just brush it off like you said "i dont give a care what you think" in your little info section. well if you dont care then why are you letting it effect you. just brush it of and say oh well maybe hes just jealous.

by you fighting back your giving him what he wants.

and im sorry i took sides before knowing the full extent of the story. i apoligize. just don't let him get to you. because if your going to let one person on a poety website bother you, your not gunna be able to handle what the real world will dish out. so just shrug it off. and eventually when he sees its not doing anything he'll stop. he the typical "bully wannabe" im sure he wouldnt be able to say shit to your face so you dont have to worry about it.

-liz