1 for 3. !! :D

if you could please AND critique my newst work entitled.. Wish, Yearn, Long, Pray, Act. id appreciate it. its the first poem i've ever written that doesnt rhym but if you read it and actually understand the meaning then i hope you'll enjoy the poem.

if you do that i will comment 3 poems of your choice. just leave titles here. and i'll comment them

just put a '*' at the begining of your comment so that i no to look here.

thanks!

plz comment on

Tomorrow I'll Be You
Under The Surface
and
Through the Eye Of The Beholder

thanx

* can u do 'so sick of tears' 'secret wish'nd 'what we'll never be'thankz