A poem I wrote for my murdered friend

I'd like some feedback on a poem I wrote for a dear friend of mine who was murdered 1 year ago on 2/4/06. Words can't say how much she is missed, but I tried to convey it somehow. Thanks. Leave your name and I'm sure to return the favor.

done.. I left a comment for you.. plz take a look at any of my featured poems... thanx a zillion