Reccomended reads

I reccomend you read my two poems (in continuation)
Lunacy and Reality.

You will find them really interesting.

I also want comments and suggestions and critiques.

They will be returned double.

read commented one....but other soon?

just for that.... bollocks to your poetry

Pardon? Wash your mouth out with soap and water please.

Though I must admit, melodramatics aren't impressive.