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  • Tricky Daze
    18 years ago

    I got a new poem for valentine's day,and i think it deserves more rates and comments,rate and comment it(don't forget to vote pleasee),so i'll do the same for 6 of yours,if you don't vote i won't too...Title is My Valentine,My Love and leave the titles that you want me to rrc
    It's a fairytale romance poem,let the story blow your mind with love
    -Thanks,Laura

  • tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup
    18 years ago

    well i dont have any that compare to yours but i do have some i would like you to return the favore on
    **dear god
    **to my niece
    **my birthday
    **untitled
    **18 today
    if you feel the need you can pick the 6th but im not worried about it
    thanks and very nice work i think i will read more for the fun of it

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    I'll have to post your comment here, I'm sorry.
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    Comment:

    "We will take off each others clothes to feel
    And let roses be our blanket as we cherish each other
    [[Very interesting lines, I enjoyed them.]]

    This was an interesting poem, sweet, yet erotic. I did enjoy it, but the flow was off and there wasn't rhyme to it... But, it was a nice attempt at a love poem. [[Love poems are practically impossible to write]] You did a very nice job.
    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5"

    I hope it is ok that I posted it here. If you don't comment me back, I understand for this is a little awkward, but if you do, please do:

    01. Die F-cking Tryin
    02. Oh, Just Shoot Me {Terzanelle}
    03. She Only Wants To Be Held {Rondeau}
    04. My Enemy {Homosexual Poem}
    05. Darling, When You Stand In The Moonlight {Terzanelle}
    06. The Love of Fate

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • ShootingStar179
    18 years ago

    I'm going to read now! Read any six of my poems! Pick what sticks out to your fancies! :)