Monstrous Transformations

Hi,

I am writing because I have this poem that has been haunting me for years... it is my own Kubla Kahn so to speak.

Anyway, I posted it on another site and I feel that it is worth working into a longer work, but I sure would appreciate the opinion of some people who know and read poetry.

The poem is posted at:

http://www.helium.com/tm/103829/

I really have worked to give it focus and rythym, but no doubt the list of what else it needs is long indeed.

Thanks,

R.D.

I don't know what to say to this poem, but I liked it. Good job.

'remakes herself each day avoiding the intellectual path" . wow this is awesome!! absolutely amazing. it is short, but you put so much in it. i am stunned. if you feel like it needs to be made into a longer work, more power to you...but i think it's wonderful just the way it is. i really can't tell you how blown away i am! :) i'd love for someone like you (talented) to check some of my poems out. i hope to read more of your work. i am so glad i looked at this post!!