Free Honest Comments!!

I'll give honest comments on any titles you leave below.
A link would be helpful.

One request - NO CLICHE WRITES please. I'll be even more harsh if you make me read one...

People clearly don't know what cliche means so,
no overused, plain, average, teenage angst, heartbreak and lovey poems. Please.

I'll say exactly what I think, so if you're looking for blind praise, you're in the wrong place.

To clarify - if your write has great qualities, I'll happily tell you; if there is something that can be improved on, I'll tell you as well.

This is a free honest comments post so this isn't compulsory, but if you're in a reading mood, feel free to leave honest feedback on my writes too.
Thanks.

Could you leave a link please, a title or put it in your favourites because the sites technical faults mean I cannot view anyones latest writes.

Thanks.

Ok thanks...I've done yours.

Can you read some of my older ones: Reflection and Ivory Falls. You know I'll check yours out :)

Also can you check out my latest two quotes please and let me know if the newest can stand as a small poem. It was a start to one originally.

Done it!!
Thanks for the comments!!

It's done!

OOOH ill do this please!! :] uhm can you please r/r/c oh my newest poem beneath the surface

:] please and thank you :]!!!

link:]

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=848376

Done it.

ummm
could you please read
butterfly
i wish i was a star
that's all, unless ya want ta read more,
luv gabriella

Done :):)

I decided to turn my quote and submit it as a small poem. Can you please let me know your thoughts and rate as well :(

Please comment on:

I want to kill her

Thank you so much in advance =0)

Done...

could you do

*black
*crimson red

thank you!

Done those...

ok thank you for the honesty..

~michelle~