marines poems

ok i have tfour marines poem and i need coments on them! please take a look at them and i will return the favor to you 4 for 8 no votes please they dont matter to me. comments are what i am after

thank god
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=843483

marine corps
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=851051

MARINES
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=853793

a new one

My hero (poem)
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=853814

sure ill do it you can read any of mine but be sure to read (i hope you here this)