feedback from my new poems...will return the favor

well as the tital says iv just wrote and added a new poem and would like some feedback if anyone has any free/spare time plz.... i wil return the favor
this wil be appriciated
thank all and cya later

ok great. :)

i did mind of anguish, awesome poem, keep up the good work,
if you could do my poem
Black

that'd be great, keep up the good work