feedback from my new poems...will return the favor

  • Lucifer
    18 years ago

    well as the tital says iv just wrote and added a new poem and would like some feedback if anyone has any free/spare time plz.... i wil return the favor
    this wil be appriciated
    thank all and cya later

  • Daz Mellow
    18 years ago

    ok great. :)

  • Dark Demise
    18 years ago

    i did mind of anguish, awesome poem, keep up the good work,
    if you could do my poem
    Black

    that'd be great, keep up the good work