First 5 people HURRY

I will do 50 word comments on any TWO poems you ask for if you do a 100 word comment on one of mine. It must be...

Things Left Unsaid.

Thanks!

i will do it!

please do the storm
and another that ISN'T from my latest poems...
your choice xxx

Love after Love

The time will come
when, with elation
you will greet yourself arriving
at your own door, in your own mirror
and each will smile at the other's welcome,

and say, sit here. Eat.
You will love again the stranger who was your self.
Give wine. Give bread. Give back your heart
to itself, to the stranger who has loved you

all your life, whom you ignored
for another, who knows you by heart.
Take down the love letters from the bookshelf,

the photographs, the desperate notes,
peel your own image from the mirror.
Sit. Feast on your life.

Derek Walcott

you can take many meanings from this but you could look at it in the same light as your poem... xxxx

Done hun
PLease do i'm ready and Perfect bliss
Have a nice day
LAURA

Hey I'm going to do them after 5 people reply. Thanks so much though.

Ok, done! Great poem hun!

Could you do

Fit Into This Mold
Sanctuary

Thanks!
Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Lol just trying to get people to see this!! And I'll do them when I get 5 people.

And Danielle, I think I already did Sanctuary.

I'll do it you can choose any poems of mine you want
*kaila

lol, looky there, that you did!

Hmm ok, then ummm you can just pick one! Thanks hun!!

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

One more person?