1 for 3- please, i need opinions now

i finally got a poem the way that i wanted it. it is for a competition, and it is to be submitted tomorrow. i would love input, honest input on it!

please and thank you.

leave your titles.

your title of your poem

David

haha.

nice, go me
RISK--there we go!

Sorry, in all the hurry i forgot.

Ok. Let me make since now, since I an chill a bit.

I'm turning the poem in tomorrow, and would love anyone and everyone's opinion on it.

Title: Risk.