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I would like my two poems, 'Walking on the Sidewalk' and 'Crimson Time' r/r/c. Please follow the guidelines below:

`Titles-No titles, no comments.
`Honest Comments-I want to improve my writing style. Without honest comments, it's kinda difficult.
`No one-liners-If I get a one-liner, expect one back.
`Votes-I would like votes, but if you're just going to downvote, don't bother. I always vote when I comment by the way ;P

Samantha

i did them both, could you do:
~fire fire
~for im one with the horse
~abandoned
~i wish i was a star
~watch them cry
thx
gabriella

Done hun
Could you please do?
-I'm Ready
-My Perfection
-Punkrock Princess
-It Will Be Me
-Promises
Thanks alot
See ya
LAURA

Gabriella, I'm finished yours. I left honest comments, like I promised I would. Laura, I'm getting to you. XD Don't worry. =)

Samantha

Done. Anyone else?

I'll do them could you do
*Daddy's story*
*Intoxicating sister*
*words*
*lost without you*
*Daddy's rage*
plz thx

Done.

Anyone else?

ok i commented and voted. please read

"good people come in every color"
and
"i pretty much hate you"

thanks

also, "ideal abortion child". thats all, you dont have to do the other two unless you want to

ok...i did it!

please vote on...
- story of love
-forever gone (the original one)
-dear diary

and you can choose which ever ones you want for the last two

Poetry, I did yours. I left a very honest comment on it. Please do not take it offensively. It was just my opinion. =)

Anyone else while I do the remaining ones?

Done the rest.

No more? Aww come on =P

done. i'm sorry if i have been a bit critical. but i was honest. i seem to feel different to your poems than everyone else. so maybe you should't give my opinion to much worry. but after you've read my poems you can decide for yourself if i have any right to say what i did.
p.s. some advice i'd give you is to sit down alone somewhere and stop worrying abot all the rules you've been taught about poetry. forget form and rhyme and rythm and just write. write from the soul. dont worry if it is confused and not to good at first. you can change and shape it as you will once you've captured the spirit of the poem.

Love is the law. :ove under will'
Rocky
my poems I'd like you to review are- Your soul screams why
- To serve the servants
-My angel of the dark
-in the end
-the chant of death

Thanx

thanks for commenting mine!!!

No problem, kisses. And Rocky, I will try to the best of my ability over the next few days to get yours done. It's been a hectic week -.-

Samantha