my poems are lonely

  • tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup
    18 years ago

    my poems are lonely and missing comments, i dont know why i just gave my poems an emotion but i need comments, i can not make myself better with out you helping my critique them,

    nessa

    P.S. i will comment this way

    you do 1 i do 1
    you do two i do 3
    you do three i do 4
    you do four i do five and so on like that, just leave the titles you commented of mine and the ones you want me to do, i will do all of the commenting on mondzy when i return home from my weekend snowboard trip,

    thanks nessa

    P.S.S. if you do all of mine i will do all of yours up to 50 poems, just another option,
    nessa

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    18 years ago

    I've got work to do, but I'll read one of yours for now. Just comment back and I'll remember to read more.