Honest Feedback. 1 for 2 or 2 for 3

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Hey everyone,
    ive got two new poems which i would like some honest feedback on. One's sad and the other is my first try at writing a Haiku.
    There called:
    - Seemingly Sweet
    - I Beg You to Help

    Please NO one liners, and critism is welcomed!
    Ill get to your poems ASAP, leave titles if you want any pacific one's done. Otherwise ill just pick any.
    Please no explicit poems as im only 15..
    Thanks in advance!
    xx

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Trying to hold on
    Done 3 of your poems.
    Thank you for the feedback.
    I enjoyed your poems, keep them up!
    xx

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Anyone else people?

  • Ironic Allure
    18 years ago

    on my way!x

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Thank you for your comments Ironic Allure ©.
    I really enjoyed your poems.
    Keep writing.
    xx

    Anyone else?

  • Rocky
    18 years ago

    i've commented on you poems
    Would you please do
    -Your soul screams why
    -Deaths hand
    - The chant of death
    Thanx
    Love is the law. love under will
    Rocky

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    ♥ღ♥~RaZaN~♥ღ♥
    Done, thank you for your comment.
    Enjoyable poems, keep at them!
    xx

    I'll get to everyone elses now...

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Stories and Alibis
    DOne. Very enjoyable poems!
    Thank you for your comments! :)
    Take care
    xx

    Rocky
    Done all of yours.
    your poems were great!
    Thanks for the ocmments!
    xx

    Anyone else in?