Honest Feedback. 1 for 2 or 2 for 3

Hey everyone,
ive got two new poems which i would like some honest feedback on. One's sad and the other is my first try at writing a Haiku.
There called:
- Seemingly Sweet
- I Beg You to Help

Please NO one liners, and critism is welcomed!
Ill get to your poems ASAP, leave titles if you want any pacific one's done. Otherwise ill just pick any.
Please no explicit poems as im only 15..
Thanks in advance!
xx

Trying to hold on
Done 3 of your poems.
Thank you for the feedback.
I enjoyed your poems, keep them up!
xx

Anyone else people?

on my way!x

Thank you for your comments Ironic Allure ©.
I really enjoyed your poems.
Keep writing.
xx

Anyone else?

i've commented on you poems
Would you please do
-Your soul screams why
-Deaths hand
- The chant of death
Thanx
Love is the law. love under will
Rocky

♥ღ♥~RaZaN~♥ღ♥
Done, thank you for your comment.
Enjoyable poems, keep at them!
xx

I'll get to everyone elses now...

Stories and Alibis
DOne. Very enjoyable poems!
Thank you for your comments! :)
Take care
xx

Rocky
Done all of yours.
your poems were great!
Thanks for the ocmments!
xx

Anyone else in?