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  • N J Thornton
    18 years ago

    I'm offering constructive criticism, which means suggestions for improvement, as well as praise where it's due.

    Leave titles (up to 3) below.

    Feel free to return the favour, though it's not compulsary.

  • N J Thornton
    18 years ago

    :) done

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    18 years ago

    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=776059

    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=809656

    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=834923 (very long)

    You don't have to if you don't want to :) I am so busy i don't think i'll be able to return the favor for a while as well...

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Seemingly Sweet
    IBeg You To Help

    Ill probably return them but i love your feedback so..

  • Tricky Daze
    18 years ago

    It's the sweet of you :)
    Could you please do?
    -Music of The Night
    -Will you be around?

    Thanks alot
    Have a nice day
    Laura

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    18 years ago

    Perfect. I just got three new poems up and I'm curious to hear what people think.

    Check out:
    Blind
    Hidden
    Intense

    Thnks you.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Haha. I love these [of yours.] You give the most amazing comments.
    But, since I always seem to mooch off you [lol], leave me a few titles that I can creatic for you. =]

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    La, La, Lie {Triquatrain}
    Midnight Massacre
    Ruby Red Rains {Haiku}

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex