New Poem: "Blood Instead of Ink" [1 for 2]

  • Darien
    18 years ago

    Hey,

    I wrote a new poem I would like everyone to check out. It's called "Blood Instead of Ink". If you read/rate/comment on it I will return the favour on two of your poems.

    Thanks :)

  • Krysten
    18 years ago

    i read it, it was really good and i elft a length comment(i'm so not a big fan of 1 liners) neways i dont care which ones you r/r/c.

  • Mousie
    18 years ago

    can you do these for me??

    Hold Me For All Time
    My Little Krisye

    thanks... and i'll check out yours, the title sounds good, hope the rest of the poem is!!! and i won't leave a little one-liner i promise!

  • Darien
    18 years ago

    Ok Mousie and Roze, I owe you a poem each.
    I shall read those love poems from my house computer, which I will be at in 2 hours time. So please be patient, and thanks for reading!..

  • dollwithafrown
    18 years ago

    Done. :]

    Please do:

    `Vanilla Sky {Terzanelle}
    `A Friend

    Thank you.

  • Darien
    18 years ago

    Ok, on my way to return favours!..

  • Darien
    18 years ago

    Ok, Mousie and Roze..
    I got the love poem done. Sorry it took so long..

    and HiddenSoul just did yours!

    anyone else?

  • ~*SugarCube*~
    18 years ago

    I did your poem!

    Can you please do
    -Memory lane
    - Never knew

    Please & thank you.

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    There you go hunni, excellent poem! Could you please do my latest two for me? Thankss cyber hubby. =P

  • Darien
    18 years ago

    Thank you ladies!..

    and Thanks cyber wifey!!! I havent talked to you in forever!!! what have you been up to?.. I hope you're not cyber cheating behind my back : P

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    Haha. Yess, i've been having lots of cyberr affairsss. Hehe. No, i could neverrr do that because i love you too muuch. Lol. =P

    Weeell, I moveeddd. Haha. To Russiaa, so that was interestingg =P

    What about youu?

  • Darien
    18 years ago

    Wow! to Russia huh?..

    Getting a bit closer to Canada! and I would never ever have an affair with you!.. maybe on my other wife but never you!!! heheh jks : P I love you too!..

    It's good to have you back!!! :)

  • Darien
    18 years ago

    Ok.. just wondering..

    anyone else?

  • azii
    18 years ago

    Done!.. Can you do my newest ones? :)

  • Darien
    18 years ago

    Done!.. thanks!..
    anyone else?

  • robin milford
    18 years ago

    i'll do that. could u read rate comment on my poems destruction "that is a old poem i had to delete to do work on so it has no nothing" and any other 1 is fine

  • Boy
    18 years ago

    i have submitted the comments. for you that poem. so plz
    rate for my poem the title is "for one second"
    plz must read this poem

  • Darien
    18 years ago

    Thanks to you both!..
    all done!!!..

    anyone else?

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    Done. ;P

    Tehe...

    Long time no read.

    Can you please do my new two? Shpank youuuuu.

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    18 years ago

    Will do, i hope you win the weekly poetry contest!

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    18 years ago

    all done. You are an incredible poet, and i hope you win the weekly contest!

    Do any of my featured poems if you would like. I don't really care if you can't get to it. The poem was worth it. :)

  • Darien
    18 years ago

    Stephen, you are a very talented writer. I wish you all the best on your writing, and I am also looking forward to reading more from you.

    Nat!!!!! Welcome back! Woot! Great job on those two poems. You'll start writing longers poems soon!

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    18 years ago

    Thanks Darien. =)