when im surounded

  • LithiumSacrifice
    18 years ago

    uhm, normally my poems are seriousl love or sadness and all that junk. but today i needed to be cheered up and took my most recent poem and chaning the last 2 lines of every stanza.... into somthing amusing.

    so.. those who need a bit of a laugh..

    please read "When Its You and I."

    and then read, "When Im Surrounded."

    lol r/r/c any if you wish. thx! =]

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    18 years ago

    please return the favor and ill check yours out now.

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    18 years ago

    wow. thats a difference! i liked those. haha