A Poem for a Poem!

Hello all, I'm pretty sure the title of this post says it all. Read and comment any of my poems (PLEASE no one liners... I'm here for helpful comments, and I'll do the same for you) A poem for a poem, so however many you help me with, i'll make sure to give my opinion on the equal amount of yours. Thank you!

i'll check some out

wooo I'll do one :)

Done, thanks for commenting guys! Anyone else?