Thoughtful

CLOSED I GUESS
After all the "arguing" in the following thread, I decided we should all move on from one liners, or comments stating simple remarks, Comments should be throught provokin, reflections, and/or helpful to the writer. Personally, I like to know how people felt while reading my poems. I also enjoy people critiquing and editing. That way I know what to improve.

The thread: http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/topic.html?topic_id=76388

Anyway, to the point: I'm going to do this for the rest of the week. I am going to give comments of a minimum of 50 words. It will be as beneficial to you as I can muster. Please understand if I do not comment right away. If you don't mind, I'd like a thoughtful comment as well. It doesn't have to be a novel long, but it needs to be helpful or insightful to me.

Thank you.

(poems I'd prefer to read at the current time: ones that offer a different perspective on the simple things.)--example- "The Cinema", "The Truth"