Honest Feedback 1 for 2

Hey all,
Ive got this new poem call "Keep falling" it aint great but honest feedback would be apreaciated.
NO one liners please, i want you to tell me what you like about it and what you dont.
Leave titles if you want any pacific ones done.
Thank you in advance, ill get to yours ASAP.
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Done. :)

Could you please do

`You Were So Innocent Then
`Fallen Leaves

Thanks.

Done! :)

My newest ones please :)

Thanks a lot

HiddenxSoul

DOne, they were both great reads. Thanks for your ocmment.
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Hate|Love
Done your 2 lates reads. Thank you for the ocmments..
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TheCommenter
I really loved your comment, thank you!! .
But you havnt posted any poems so i just voted on the quotes.
Thanks again for the comment!
xx