New member, continued...

I requested comments a few days ago, and have edited the structure of my poems as per the suggestions I've recieved. If you read any of them before, let me know what you think of the edits. If you didn't read them before, please let me know what you think anyway!!! Let me know if you want any of your commented on!! THanks a bunch

lost in yesterday
to be free
the light
read aloud...unfinished
the one that wasn't

Hey, i'm gonna check it out now :)

here are a couple of mine you can comment on

1. Apology to you
2. The rambler

thanks so much :)