Let's trade Constructive Criticism

These are my poems I have been told are my best. If you can offer some constructive criticism, I will return the favor with no hard feelings.

Wisdom (The flow seems to be off to me in one line of this one....)

Picture in a Frame

Broken

Witness to all Seasons

I'll check them out...here are mine. I have really never shown my poetry to anyone, so any comments/criticism would be great. Thanks!!

lost in yesterday
to be free
the light
read aloud...unfinished
the one that wasn't

Eh. I feel bad.

I could only do the two because the other two are love poems and I can't access love poems [well, to comment, that is.]

However, I really enjoyed them. Thank you for writing them.
You may choose whatever catches your eye -- some are better than others, lmao, but due to downrating, you'll have to judge for yourself.

If you'd rather I leave a few titles, though, just inform me. =]

Thanks for your time. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

I'd love to. im new here but would like to take the chance to say hello and please return the favor