Let's trade Constructive Criticism

  • Rachel RTVW
    18 years ago

    These are my poems I have been told are my best. If you can offer some constructive criticism, I will return the favor with no hard feelings.

    Wisdom (The flow seems to be off to me in one line of this one....)

    Picture in a Frame

    Broken

    Witness to all Seasons

  • ivkr81
    18 years ago

    I'll check them out...here are mine. I have really never shown my poetry to anyone, so any comments/criticism would be great. Thanks!!

    lost in yesterday
    to be free
    the light
    read aloud...unfinished
    the one that wasn't

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Eh. I feel bad.

    I could only do the two because the other two are love poems and I can't access love poems [well, to comment, that is.]

    However, I really enjoyed them. Thank you for writing them.
    You may choose whatever catches your eye -- some are better than others, lmao, but due to downrating, you'll have to judge for yourself.

    If you'd rather I leave a few titles, though, just inform me. =]

    Thanks for your time. =]

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • The Pessimistic Peabody
    18 years ago

    I'd love to. im new here but would like to take the chance to say hello and please return the favor