New Poem: "The Boy You Can't Resist (Sonnet)" 1 for 2

Hey everyone,

I wrote a new poem called "The Boy You Can't Resist" and it's a Sonnet. I would like for you to read, vote and comment on it and let me know what you think. I will return the favour on 2 of your poems if you do so for me!.. thanks : )

Hey! yea sure i'll check it out, i love your work, i wrote 2 new ones myself

1. Apology to you
2. The rambler

i'll check your out now, here i go :)

Thanks!.. anyone else?..

Done

Could you please do "Feed you" and "wretched prison"?

Thanks

Steph

Thanks Tainted Beauty!..
and thanks for the bump Joe :)

anyone else?..