Bright eyes lyrics, short contest (ps i'm a contest virgin)...

Ok, i am slightly inquisitive so have decided to make a contest, hope people join in! well it has to be in my thursday next week,

1st place= 3comments and place on favs!!
2nd place= 2comments
3rd place=1comment

the titles are all bright eyes song titles,
as many people per title as desired, NO NEED TO RESERVE.

no strict rules apart from closing date, can't be too long (eg an essay), i prefer depressing poems, but not necessary, oh yeah new poems preferred. you are allowed up to three poems if you so desire...

righteoo that's the basics (i hope)

titles are:

1) Feb 15th

2) if winter ends

3)a perfect sonnet

4)a line allows for progress a cricle does not

5)Lover i don't have to love

6)It's cool we can still be friends

7)Contrast and compare

8)Exaltation On A Cool, Kitchen Floor

9)How Many Lights Do You See?

10)I Won't Ever Be Happy Again

11)Mirrors And Fevers

12)An Attempt To Tip The Scales

13)Well whiskey

14)Make A Plan To Love Me

15)Bad Blood

Have fun, and remember the 12th of april, closing time, ENJOY friends
xxx

Ooh i cant decide between Feb 15th and if winter ends...well...i already had an idea for it so i will take Feb 15th

is it ok if we use words referring to something sexual? im not writing an erotic poem tho...

How Many Lights Do You See?
by: Ciao

How many lights do you see
each time you walk away from me?
Do they get brighter, or continue to dim?
Is leaving me your only sin?

How many lights can you count?
For all your actions, can you account?
All the times you'd swore not to relive;
All of the times you thought I'd forgive.

How many lights light your endless road;
Walking down silently, carrying your heavy load?
Is the burden just too much to bear?
Is there something that you'd like to share?

How many lights dimly light your way?
Do you have a voice, or just nothing to say?
What happened to you, you were always so sweet?
Being with you was such a real treat.

How many lights are you aware of
walking down the road of false love?
Walking away from all the troubles, past.
Maybe you thought that we wouldn't last.

How many lights go out each day?
Each one for things you couldn't say.
It's funny, how much your leaving makes me free.
So tell me, How Many Lights Do You See?

K well...this poem absolutely sucks but im gonna enter it anyway lmao

Febuary 15th

Febuary 15th
The night that ended my life,
The day I went insane,
I couldnt handle the strife,

Doing just fine,
Until you tagged along,
You ripped out my heart,
As you pulled out your dong,

You hurt me,
You left me for dead,
Now I will kill you,
Just shoot you in the head,

Youll be laying on the floor,
Just like I did,
I will have went bang bang,
Just like you did,

Now you lay lifeless,
All on the ground,
Now like you did to me,
You'll be tied up and bound

Haha we are the only ones who have entered...

Ciao~

Can I have make a plan to love me then?

Thanks for entering ppl n don't worry there's no need to reserve because people can do more than one poem and same titles etc, just have fun, thanks a lot guys xxxx

Thanks for entering n no it doesnt have to relate to the song xxx

Nevermind, just read about no reservations, whoops lol.

No you don't have to reserve, but carry on getting them in please, loves xxxx

Make A Plan To Love Me

Think about everything to mesmerize
Make me wonder with all of your life mystery
Try to make me melt with your eyes
But my heart isn't the one that easy to carry

Think about me on the difficult situations
Look at me like i'm your newest invention
Draw me to your mind to find my functions
But I'm not your machine that have tension

Your thought is just to buy a drink for me
Then you will say you loved me at the first sight
Let me tell you what is really gonna be
Your plans will be pointless to love me tonight

Wow, these poems are pretty good!!! any more for any more? xxx

Well Whiskey
By: Twisted Heart

As the bottle tips from lifeless fingers
The darkness pits against the wall
In the cool air, a stench still lingers
As footfalls sound out in the hall

Against the darkened shadows cast
Inside the room where bedding fell
Among the feelings of the past
Lie memories lost in this shell.

Too many nights the pain was waiting
Alone within the slumbered dreams
And though they came anticipating
Wounds to the soul burst at the seams.

No hope surviving from the hunger
That beats within the drink in hand
Just bits of hell that pull it under
And sifts among the pain that stands.

Now lifeless arms hold to the whiskey
A savior to the soul is thought
Blood dead eyes no longer see
As once again the bottle drops.

Ooh, this is getting tricky to judge, good poem, thanks for entering xx

Sorry only just found the question, you can use any words you like including sexual and profanity they're your poems guys, write what you like and enjoy. xxx

Make A Plan To Love Me
by: Josh

I have tried all I can,
To simply make you look my way.
Yet I end up looking foolish,
Day after day.

My actions seem meaningless,
And totally insane.
But all I'm after is your love,
Why couldn't you feel the same.

Why couldn't you love me?,
Or even plan on trying.
'Cause what I offer is real,
But you don't seem like buying.

I guess this is really it,
But I'll never give in.
I shall never give up,
Because neither is a sin.

Here you go. Hope you liked it.

I Won't Ever Be Happy Again

Sick Of Selfless acts and Sacrifice
It was never enough, it wont suffice

My head controls my Heart and my love is contained
But now I'm bursting out Everytime it Rains...

why can't I be Selfish just this time?
why can't I try my best to make you mine?

I know I can't make you love me if you just don't
You can't make your heart feel something it just won't

Getting over you is the hardest thing I'll ever do
When that day comes, I'll be missing you
and a part of me Hopes you miss me too

But the other part of me Hopes you'll move on
Hopes you forget about me as soon as I'm gone

And if everything happens to go my way
And all the colors in the world are different shades of Grey
And I regret all what happened that day
there will be no going back to yesterday...

(an already submitted poem)
http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=856728

Thanks for entering peopleeeeos, woop wooop my contest is coming along great, cheers to everyone oh yes!! "i dont think these feelings are going to leave" bye nowxxxx

Any more for anymore, know this is against the new rules, but i won' tell if u don't xxx

Cotton candy lips and golden hair,
She walks by and all the gents stare,
A mini skirt and midriff shirt,
The last thing on her mind is to flirt -

She's here for the good time at the bar,
Dancing with the boys like a movie star,
They exchange words from afar but they don't know,
What she really thinks when the lights are down low -

And it hurts her baby on the floor crying,
To know that slowly his Mother is dying,
But she holds her heart together with a thread,
Each morning when she wakes to a pounding head -

But the room is spinning and she still can see,
That through the narcotics and alcohol debris,
The blurred image staring back at her,
Isn't lying through the mirrors and fevers.

-Jenna. Elphick
April 10, 2007

I don't really like it, I had an idea for this poem in my head but when I tried to write it I ended up scrapping it like twenty times lol. But, I do see others there that I like, so I may do another one (:

I really liked this, what you on about, it's great, but yeah defo do another one, i love the titles, it's why i chose them, there's so much ambiguity to them... :D

Lol I'm never quite satisfied with my work haha. But yeah I probably will do another one tonight I wrote down some titles that I really liked. (:

Well all entries are always welcome xxx

If Winter Ends

If winter ends the ice will break
Freezing water seeping through
Much like your heart will shatter
When I have to leave you

If winter ends the snow will thaw
Leaving the world a muddy brown
As will your life become
When I'm no longer around

If winter ends the birds return
A desire for only to mate
Yet I will not be there for you
It will be much too late

If winter ends so does beauty
I'll have lost much more than a friend
But then my freezing tears will fall
Creating winter once again

OK end of contest results are in on monday xxx

Results are in, i just want to say that this was so hard to judge and that i wish you all could win, there was not one bad poem in this contest. thank you for entering all.
However:

3rd Place:Mirrors and Fevers by lush fcuk
2nd Place:Make a Plan to Love Me by pretty in punk [Laura]
and...
1st Place: Well Whiskey by Twisted heart

Btw if any of the winners would like particular poems doing let me know by tonight and i will comment and review tomorrow, if none are specified then i will choose random ones xxxx

Actually everyone else choose one poem and ill rate that too as well as comment, all your poems deserve it. 3rd place now has 2 comments, 2nd three and 1st can have 4

Thanks! This was a fun contest. =)

Can you please do...

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Congrats winners!! =]

xxCiaoxx

Hello could you please read Do Not Yield. thanks

Wowwwww
You made my day really
*jumps up and down*
*smiles*
Thanks for doing my latest ones hun,i finally understood why you commented and rated my poems :)
Have a nice day everyone
And congratz other winners
Luv ya all
Sincerely
Laura