Honest feedback??? anybody?

You know the drill, Ill return the favor

"foreshadowing a life"

just let me know what you would like me to rrc on :)

~natalie

Hey i'll do it, here are my new one

1. The rambler
2. Apologys to you

i'll check yours out now, thanks:)

I read the poem, i loved it! it was well written, i commented too :)

Thanks :) im off to read yours

I commented & voted on 'forshadowing a life'. i have 8 new posts. if any of them catch your eye, i'd love to read your thoughts. thanks. -beav

So lost, thanks beav :)

Wow, that was beautiful.

Could you please do "Feed you" or "Wretched Prison", which ever catches your eye:P

Thanks

Steph

I think ill read both :) it'll be a little bit though I gotta run out to the barn to feed my babies

thanks so much for taking time to read the poem :)

Natalie