Honest feedback??? anybody?

  • cowgirlstar26
    18 years ago

    You know the drill, Ill return the favor

    "foreshadowing a life"

    just let me know what you would like me to rrc on :)

    ~natalie

  • Cherise
    18 years ago

    Hey i'll do it, here are my new one

    1. The rambler
    2. Apologys to you

    i'll check yours out now, thanks:)

  • Cherise
    18 years ago

    I read the poem, i loved it! it was well written, i commented too :)

  • cowgirlstar26
    18 years ago

    Thanks :) im off to read yours

  • beav
    18 years ago

    I commented & voted on 'forshadowing a life'. i have 8 new posts. if any of them catch your eye, i'd love to read your thoughts. thanks. -beav

  • cowgirlstar26
    18 years ago

    So lost, thanks beav :)

  • Tainted Beauty
    18 years ago

    Wow, that was beautiful.

    Could you please do "Feed you" or "Wretched Prison", which ever catches your eye:P

    Thanks

    Steph

  • cowgirlstar26
    18 years ago

    I think ill read both :) it'll be a little bit though I gotta run out to the barn to feed my babies

    thanks so much for taking time to read the poem :)

    Natalie