Hey, need some bruital honesty on my writing.

Hello everyone. I was just wondering if some of you could comment and vote for the poems you like, and comment and tell me your honest opinion of them, if you hate them, then say so..Also if there is something that should be changed, please let me know. For the ones that comment, I'll try to get over to reading yours. Thanks. =)

Hey, Yep i'll read a few of yours hopefully you dont find my honesty to be harsh though. If so i apologise

No, no, be as harsh as you want. lol.. I don't want people lying to me, thanks. =)

I read yours, and basically most have the same things that need to be touched up. Though the emotion and vocab is nicely used, most people won't get over those hurdles of unbalanced rhyme scheme and excess of words.

Please don't take what I'm saying the wrong way, It's just that most people would stop reading after the first stanza if not written properly or seemed unbalanced.

All right, thank you. I will keep that in mind. What are you talking about when you say "unbalanced rhyme scheme" On whihc poems and such?

The one's that really did it for me with the rhyme scheme were "hold back the tears" and "the path of life"

Hey, thanks for commenting, rating and giving me some tips. They were appreciated. Anyone else have any comments or tips for me?

Anyone at all?