Colored Glasses

My first post and I'd like some feedback. Anything would be great. I don't know how this works, but if I am correct I am supposed to comment you back? If you want me to, just tell me what you want commented. Thanks.

-TonyTRADEMARK

Thank you for your comment. It's appreciated. I am willing to do whatever you give me, Miss Ogen. Within reason, of course.

-TonyTRADEMARK

That is all? Are you sure? I can always do more. I've got some time.

-TonyTRADEMARK

Heya, i did this could you please do any of my poems that catch your eye. Thanks alot ~mel

Thank you both. I did both of yours.