My latest masterpiece!

HAHAHAHAHAHA

but seriously..."Nights We Cannot Escape" and "Sunshine and Snow" are pretty good, if I do say so myself. Or...you could prove me wrong and tell me how to improve? Doubled comments for each, but I will do no more than 4 so dont comment on more than that! unless you want to lol

Please and thank you!

Ok i read one poem///well i just wrote this long comment right here...but it was just erased whci ticks me off...so ill just say which poems id like you to comment and rate:
" Insane"
and
"Nothing"

thanku!!