Hi guys :)

  • Marc Ortiz
    18 years ago

    Hi guys anyone care to read and comment my poem "Goodbye" it would help me improve in my future works. http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=873985 < Link Thanks in advance :) - I will be Delighted to comment and rate your poems :)

  • MaSkEdSoUl
    18 years ago

    I did it and I really really didnt expect it to end like that lol.

  • Marc Ortiz
    18 years ago

    Aww thanks guys :) it will help me improve in my future poems!

  • Marc Ortiz
    18 years ago

    Ok thanks guys for reading my poem :)

  • Anonymous Angel
    18 years ago

    Hey,
    i just commented on your poem =)
    good work dont change anything 5/5
    kisses stephanie

  • Sweet lig
    18 years ago

    Hi i just want to let u know i was so so impress to ur work and im really enjoyed... i want to read all ur poems but i have to go now... i will read nextime again hope u can write more.... thanks

  • dollwithafrown
    18 years ago

    I commeted and voted on it.

    It was a great read. I really enjoyed it. Such a sad ending, though.

  • Marc Ortiz
    18 years ago

    Thanks for all the comment guys :) this will help me improve :) TC guys

  • Marc Ortiz
    18 years ago

    Anyone else?