Two poems, for three poems. (:

Yeah, mind reading any two of my newest three poems?
I havent been on this site for months, and just yesterday I decided to come and add some newer poems.
So I've added three more.
I'd love it if you took a look and commented and rated.
the favour would be returned, let me know what three youd like me to take a look at, i love to read others work. (:

I have rated & commented your two poems.
could you please r/r/c on

1. bitch
2. Thank you
3. Depression Took Over Her Life

Please & thank you.

Thankyou love (:

okay , ill take a look at yours.

Hey,
i just did comments on all three of your poems,
you're an amazing writer =)

could you comment on some of my poems? only if you want to, it doesnt matter which one =)
kisses stephanie

Done, sorry for the length of them. I get carried away with comments...lol But your a really good writter. You can choose any of mine that you wish to do.

I read both of your works, and I think they are very impressive, and thank you alot of reading my work, its really appriciated loves.

And Brigette, your work.. its real amazing.
I think I'm going to keep reading more, because its real interesting. i love it.
And thankyou for giving honest opinions and feedback, tahts what I'm looking for.
(:

Hello! ive done 2 of yours. good writing.

if you could do.......

checkmate
does your buttondown oxford dream of irons at night?

-Tom

Awe, thank you! I think I'm gonna read more of your work as well. && thanks so much for taking the time to leave comments like those. Yes I suppose forced rhyming is a curse thats bestowed upon all rhyming poets, lol It does explain why free verse became popular!

Free verse is not very popular.. i get alot of negativity twords my work. people rambleing poetic rhetoric at me.. over stanzas......