2 new poems...

If you comment my 2 new poems i will comment 4 of your poems... if they are HONEST GOOD comments... i will comment 5 of your poems. i do NOT want any one liners, so if thats what you do... dont expect any comments back. the names of the 2 poems are "That Night" & "The Last Kiss"

I'll do it even though you've commented a lot of the newer ones I have some titles
Melanie
Daddy's story
and any other ones u havent read

I'll do yours can you please do Just these 2

The Seven deadly sins
&
The Seven Holy Virtues

thanks alot~mel

Donee` .
Could you please do :

`Vivid Memories
`Breathe
`Me
`Life

Thanks . (:
..__MiNDYY

I got your two.. They were great except for a few minor things... If you could please do "weakness" and then whatever else appeals you.. Thanks

Alright i got everyones done, so the offer is over for now.