2 new poems!

  • Kaila
    18 years ago

    *Melanie*
    *summer nights* (stupid title)

    anyways I'll return the favor if there long I'll double it

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  • Sydney
    18 years ago

    Sure. I did it already ^_^. Can you check out my "Sour Love" and "Clockwise". I liked summer nights by the way.

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  • Kaila
    18 years ago

    Ok thx and yes i'll do it

    any others?

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  • Sydney
    18 years ago

    Hmmm. Forever And More possibly..Thanks! Any suggestions on them also? Trying to make the flow better as you suggested

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  • Kaila
    18 years ago

    Ok but for real if u fixed the flow it would be better

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  • Sydney
    18 years ago

    Yeah i suppose. Thanks for the help

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  • Kaila
    18 years ago

    No problem...

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  • Kaila
    18 years ago

    Anyone elsE?

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  • ImNotPerfect20
    18 years ago

    Ok. read your poem and left a comment. if you wanna you can read mine its called lost. actucally any of them you want to read is fine..

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