Limited time offer....

  • N J Thornton
    18 years ago

    I'm offering to read up to four of your poems and leave honest feedback.

    But I am just asking one teeny weeny favour as well, that you comment on one of mine...any of my most recent please :)

    Once you've commented (honestly) and if you leave the titles here, (or just inform me you've commented here) I'll read four of your poems.

    No one liners please...unless you want me to leave honest oneliners on your poems.

    OK thanks in advance.

  • ASPHYXIATED
    18 years ago

    I loved your feedback last time.
    It was honest an helpful, something which doesnt come around much.

    I'd love to do one of your poems. :]]

    If able could my most recent?

    Thank you :]]

    --&&Done--

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    There you go hunny. =]

    Could you please do ::

    `Overpowering Desires
    `Breaking Apart A Perfect Life

    && any other two that catch your eye. =]

    Ooh, and can you pleasee VOTE, thanks so much hunn. xxx.

  • firexdancer
    18 years ago

    Okay, i did smile, i hope the comment was good...

    could ya plz do... "the bells" cause i need help on that, and then any other 3 that you like.... thx so much
    luv gabriella

  • BrokenREALiTy
    18 years ago

    Donee` [:
    Could you please do :

    `Rescue Me
    `Vivid Memories
    `Breathe
    `Does He

    Thank you .
    ..__MiNDYY

  • N J Thornton
    18 years ago

    Phew!

    I've done all those...
    Oh and thanks for the comments....

    Dare I ask, is there anyone else??

  • Vanessa
    18 years ago

    I read Illirate, and The fight. Both of these poems are excellent writes. I like the way that you word things, It takes me a minute to get the full meaning, because just when I think I understand, I see it from another point of view. Your talent is exceptional. Keep up the good work 5/5 on both. And you can do any of my latest poems that you think you might want to do. thanks.

  • Melpomene
    18 years ago

    Heya, I'll do one of your poems. Could you please do any of my 3 it would be greatly appreciated. ~mel