Goran Rahim
18 years ago
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I have a special offer for this poem ofmine, |
Goran Rahim
18 years ago
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Tnxxxxxxxxx alot |
Tricky Daze
18 years ago
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Done goran..just do which one attracts you..or my newest one |
Goran Rahim
18 years ago
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Ok i own three persons comments so far, im getting to them soon |
TamborineMan
18 years ago
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I r/r/c your poem. I hope you continue to revise it (with or without using my comments). It doesn't feel complete but I think it has a lot of potential. |