Honest Feedback 1 for 2

Hey everyone...

- Peaceful Blue, A Gentle Breeze...

Yay i want you guys to give me honest feedback on a poem that isnt sad or dark. Amazing isnt it? Lol!

Ok well the rules are:
- Honest Feedback
- Be as nasty as you want - i want to improve my work, i can only do that if i know what people dont like about it.
- If you want specific poems being done leave titles.
- No one liners or anything of the sort..
- No explicit poems of your's...

And well thats it...
Know that ill get to your work as soon as possible, ill be honest with it. I hardley ever rate poems, becuase ithink the systems messed up... but if anyone wants me to rate their poems tell me and i will.

Well i hope you enjoy the poem.
Thank you! :)
xx

I'll do yours, but you don;t have to do any of mine, as mine are mostly eplict. I do it for you because everyone needs feed back

Heya, I'll do one of yours if you could please do my poems
*Street soldiers
&
*The Seven Deadly Sins

Thanks alot~mel

Done! :)
Great poems!
Thanks for comments you guys.
xx

Anyone else?

I did it, it really made me so very calm, it was beautiful.

you can do any of mine that you like, i hope you enjoy them..
x
gabriella

Gabriella
Done. Thanks for that comment! :)
And yeah i did enjoy that poem.
Keep writing!
xx

Anyone else?